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改错啦.Dear Mr Brown,

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改错啦.Dear Mr Brown,
How is your stay in Beijing?
I am writing to tell you a piece of excited news:I ( )
won the first place in Spoken English Competition of ( )
our city.The progress that I made it is due to your ( )
kind help.You spent much time helping me with my ( )
spoken English that I make great progress during the ( )
competition.I remembered your advice :" Speaking ( )
slowly but clearly with a smile on your face."Thank ( )
you very much for your time and advice.
I heard you and your wife would visit our school ( )
before long.I'm very glad and look forward to see ( )
you.I sent you a camera for a small gift.Please check ( )
the mail and I hope you will like it.
Yours
Li Ping
改错啦.Dear Mr Brown,
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