说一下这篇英语作文所包含的错误.如果总分是25分的话,大概可以打多少?

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说一下这篇英语作文所包含的错误.如果总分是25分的话,大概可以打多少?
In the past,my home town was beautiful.There were a wonderful river and had many fish in it.Along the river had staright tress that could effect our feelings,it is vital use that could let me feel relived.Natives lived a poor but happy life.
And nowdays,my home town is difference ,side of the river build up too much building.There are many boats on the river.It is not only means that our life has gradually chang but also forebast my motherland chang better.
I think it is a change to make a plan for future.

1 wonderful river 搭配不当.
2 既然用了There were ,再用had 是不恰当的.--There were a wonderful river and had many fish in it.
3 has staright tress
应该是straight trees吧?不过没有听说过有此种搭配.我认为vigorous trees比较恰当些.
4 第二段开始,不应该用and打头,应为说的是转折的状况.
5 side of the river build up too much building
应该用built up.主语也应该是building.
6 It is not only means that our life has gradually chang but also forebast my motherland chang better.
这一句就没有通顺的词.
7 最后一句实在看不明白.
这篇作文应该在5分以内.如果是我的话打个三分.

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