英语翻译上次翻译的稿件如下:[媒体作为核心的信息传递工具,对企业与市场的沟通起着至关重要的作用.以网络和数字化为标志的新

英语翻译
上次翻译的稿件如下:
[媒体作为核心的信息传递工具,对企业与市场的沟通起着至关重要的作用.以网络和数字化为标志的新媒体时代,把企业媒体组合战略扩展到了更深广的层面.本文综合新时期学术界对新媒体在传媒和经济领域中作用的探讨,结合产业经济学的相关理论和知识,对新媒体的内涵和特点进行了分析.根据学术界对新媒体的定义,归纳了比较常见的新媒体类型.在新媒体的背景之下,本文对企业媒体组合战略制定的各个方面进行了比较全面地分析.在对新媒体组合所需条件分析的同时,引出了对新时期媒体组合战略的重新思考,探讨新媒体时代企业媒体组合的可行性策略,同时对新媒体整合的注意事项以及整合效果的评估标准进行了论述.文章最后结合“蒙牛•超女”媒体组合运用的成功案例,具体分析新媒体组合的实际运用.]
As an essential carrier of information transmission,the mass media plays a crucial role in the communication between business and market.The so-called Age of New Media characterized by network and digitization,promotes the business-media ties strategies to an even deeper level.Integrating the concurrent academic opinions on new media's contribution to the economy,the author makes an analysis of the connotation and commercial features of new media based on the knowledge of industrial economics and common economics analysis models,and sums up several forms of new media according to its commonly accepted definition.Then the author analyzes various aspects of business-market ties strategies,introduces new ideas on this strategy while studying traditional practices,and discusses some feasible norms as well as strategies to be adopted during different phases of product development.Meanwhile,some evaluation standards of media selection and combination are also advanced.
大家最好能在这个翻译稿件的基础之上进行完善补充,
比较着急,
我的意思是让大家把中文翻译成英语
不是把英语翻成中文

我是分句改的,括号里是我的译法.
As an essential carrier of (tool for) information transmission,the mass media plays a crucial role in ( + facilitating) communication between business ( “companies” is better here) and market.
The so-called Age of New Media characterized by network and digitization,promotes the business-media ties strategies to an even deeper level.(In the Age of New Media characterized by networking and digitization,the strategic cooperation between companies and the media has reached a higher level on a larger scale.)
Integrating the concurrent academic opinions on new media's contribution to the economy,the author makes an analysis of the connotation and commercial features of new media based on the knowledge of industrial economics and common economics analysis models,
(based on the current research on how the New Media could impact the mass media ans economy,together with relevant theories and knowledge of industrial economics,this essay gives an analysis of the composition and characteristics of the New Media)
and sums up several forms of new media according to its commonly accepted definition.
(Based on the present definition of the New Media,an outline of types of the New Media that are commonly seen is given.)
author analyzes various aspects of business-market ties strategies,introduces new ideas on this strategy while studying traditional practices,and discusses some feasible norms as well as strategies to be adopted during different phases of product development.Meanwhile,some evaluation standards of media selection and combination are also advanced
(In view of the emerging New Media,this essay offers a thorough analysis of various aspects of the strategy-making for company-media team-up.Apart from the necessary conditions of a company-media team-up,this essay also introduces some new ideas and feasible strategies for a company-media team-up in the Age of New Media as well as illustrates pitfalls in the integration of the New Media and evaluation criteria for the integration.The essay ends with a case study of the successful Mongolian Cow- Super Voice team-up and analyses its application in details.