请帮我修改英语日记2010-4-10 Saturday RainyIt was a long day.I had a i

请帮我修改英语日记
2010-4-10 Saturday Rainy
It was a long day.
I had a interview in a far place at 9:30 so I got up early to catch bus.Unluckily I was listening radio with my earphone when the conductress annouced the stop I wanted to go.When I realized that,20 minutes had passed already.So,I was late finally.After I finished my written test and went out of the building,it started raining,but I did not bring my umbrella.Plus,the place for interview was really really far from where written test was holded.I got there wet.I draw out my cellphone,asking the interviewer to pick me up,only found that it didn't work.It's broken.Another interviewee made a call,we waited for 20 minutes until a girl came to pick us up.The interview botched.On my way back to dorm I catched a wrong bus again as I wanted to leave eariler.The longest one rather than a wrong one,I guess.It stopped 55 stops before arriving!
I got to my dorm exhausted.I took a shower quickly,went to lay on my bed,turn on my computer,clicked here and there with the mouse,finding something to kill sometime before falling into sleep.Maybe it was that I was so tired,nothing was exciting for me,until I found a novel in a deep file of my hard disc.I read it.It's written by me.It's about my college life.Before today I almost have forgotten the existence of it.
Many things were recalled,funny things,stupid things and bad things I did before.I closed my eyes now and then,thinking about all the things I had lost in the past couple of years,times gone forever and people disappered from my life,never imagining that I could recall those things in such detail.I could smell the foods of cafeteria.I could hear the voices of them.I read on without a break,until my roomie came back.A sudden pang of sadness hit me.I realized that I can never go back to those day,those shining days in my life.Time goes by,things changed.

April 10 ,2010
Today is rainy Saturday.To me is a long day.
I had a interview in a far place at 9:30 .So I got up early to catch bus.Unluckly,I listened radio use my earphone when the conductress annouced the stop I wanted to go.When I realized that,20 minutes has passed already.So finally,I was late.After I finished my write test and then went out of the building.It is started raining,but I did not bring my umbrella.Plus,the place for interview was really really far from where write test was hold.When I got there,I was wet.I took out my cellphone,asked the interviewer to pick me up,.I found it didn't work is broken.It's broken.Another interviewee made a call,I waited for 20 minutes until a girl came to pick us up.The interview botched.On my way back to dorm,I caught a wrong bus again .As I wanted to leave more early.The longest one rather than a wrong one,I guess.It stopped 55 stops before arriving.
When I got to my dorm,I exhausted.I quickly took a shower and went to lay on my bed.Then turn on my computer to click here and there with the mouse,found something to kill sometime before falling into sleep.Maybe it was that I was so tired,nothing was exciting for me,until I found a novel in a deep file of my hard disc.I read it.It's written by me.It was about my college life.Before today I almost have forgotten the existence of it.
Many things recalled in my mind,funny things,stupid things and bad things that I did before.I closed my eyes and then thinking about all the things I had lost in the past couple of years ,times gone forever and people disappered from my life.Never imagining that I could recall those things in such detail.I could smell the foods of cafeteria.I could hear the voices of them.I read on without a break,until my room came back.Suddenly,pang of sadness hit me.I realized that I can never go back to those day.Those shining days in my life.Time going by things changing.
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