神马作文网请各位大虾帮我看看下面的句子在语法上面有错吗?
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请各位大虾帮我看看下面的句子在语法上面有错吗?
let me introduce me to you.
I am a student in Class Four,Grade Six of xxx Primary school.
she think we should eat a lot healthy foods such as apples and fish every day.
I like sports ,I like playing badminton,basketball,football and swimming.
but I am only good at playing badminton.
要写介绍自己的英语作文了,写好了,
请各位大虾帮我看看,检查检查!
我要的是速度和准确!
好的我可以追加的!
我觉得最后一句读起来不通顺，
let me introduce me to you.
I am a student in Class Four,Grade Six of xxx Primary school.
she think we should eat a lot healthy foods such as apples and fish every day.
I like sports ,I like playing badminton,basketball,football and swimming.
but I am only good at playing badminton.
要写介绍自己的英语作文了,写好了,
请各位大虾帮我看看,检查检查!
我要的是速度和准确!
好的我可以追加的!
我觉得最后一句读起来不通顺，
第一句的第二个me建议改成myself,更好一点.
第二句很好~
第三句she thinks we should eat a lot of(lots of也行)healthy food such as apples and fish every day.
第四句也没错~
再问： 最后一句没有问题吗？？
再答： 最后一句不是和第四句连着的吗。。没有啊。
再问： “最快回答”说把第四句的swimming放在playing......的前面
，这样通顺一点对吗？
再答： playing和swimming是并列的，但是playing后面跟的有点多，确实放在后面逻辑更通顺。。
第二句很好~
第三句she thinks we should eat a lot of(lots of也行)healthy food such as apples and fish every day.
第四句也没错~
再问： 最后一句没有问题吗？？
再答： 最后一句不是和第四句连着的吗。。没有啊。
再问： “最快回答”说把第四句的swimming放在playing......的前面
，这样通顺一点对吗？
再答： playing和swimming是并列的，但是playing后面跟的有点多，确实放在后面逻辑更通顺。。