英语翻译我喜欢翻译东西,下面是我翻译的,请大家给PP,原文:猫养老鼠有人买来一只猫,叫它好好看管粮食,捉到老鼠给奖赏．没

英语翻译
我喜欢翻译东西,下面是我翻译的,请大家给PP,
原文:
猫养老鼠
有人买来一只猫,叫它好好看管粮食,捉到老鼠给奖赏．没几天,花猫把老鼠抓完了,每次捉到老鼠,都能得到一条鱼.这天,花猫捉来一只小老鼠,主人丢把鱼骨头给它,说：”大老鼠糟蹋的粮食多,小老鼠糟蹋的粮食少,捉十只小老鼠也比不上捉半只大老鼠的贡献.论功行赏,捉住这只和没有抓住老鼠一样,你只能吃这个!”第二天,又有一只小老鼠来偷粮食.花猫想,捉了它实在不顶用,便在粮屯上把它养了起来,等老鼠吃得又肥又大的时候,大花猫才捉去见主人,说：”这家伙吃掉了半囤子的粮食啦!”主人见老鼠比花猫还要大,糟蹋的粮食又如此的多,非常高兴,立即赏了它两条大鲤鱼,并鼓励它说：“你的贡献太大了,希望你捉更多这样的老鼠来!”“只看表面成绩,不讲实际效果的笨蛋”,花猫暗暗笑道,“你能有多少粮食给我养老鼠?”
我翻的译文:
A cat supply for the mouse
A man buy a cat,in order to watch the cereal,if it can catch a mouse,it would be get a reward.some time later,all the mouse to be catched over.Every time,if it can catched a mouse it can be get a good fish as reward.One day,it catched a small mouse,the host give it some fishbone,and say :a big mouse eat so many food,but a litter mouse eat litter,catched ten small mice not rather than a big mouse,get a small mouse like you didn’t,so you only to eat this!And the next day,another mouse steal the cereal,the cat think catch this one no any use,so it supported that mouse,and when the mouse become fat and fat,than catched it ,and give it to its host,and says :this guy have eat more half of the cereal,and the host see the moust biger than his cat,think the the mouse eat so many food from the cereal,become very happy,and than give a big good fish for cat,and encourage the cat say:I hope you can catch the mouse like this,yours contribute very great,the cat laugh,and think that you only see the result,but didn’t think the end.So How many food can you supply?
我刚开始翻,请大家多多指教,

我只看了第一句话
A man buy a cat,in order to watch the cereal,if it can catch a mouse,it would be get a reward
buy显然时态不对,要用一般过去时.
一句话有多分句,至少要加个连词and
一句话中主语不统一,且it指代不明.
Once upon a time,a man bought a cat to guard the cereal well,and he promised to reward it for catching mice.