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帮我改一篇英语作文（初一水平）
Life In The Future
By Daniel
Hi,I’m Daniel.I think the life in the future will be very interesting and comfortable.
People will live in the sea because the weather is very hot in summer and a little warm in winter.They can walk in the water like fish swim in the water.And no one will do the dull and heavy jobs.Machines will do these jobs.So people will have lots of free time and they can have a holiday.
Students won’t study in school.They will study at home with their computers.They will send their homework to their teachers by email.And they will talk to their teachers on their computers.
I think this dream will be true.So I must work and study hardly.
Life In The Future
By Daniel
Hi,I’m Daniel.I think the life in the future will be very interesting and comfortable.
People will live in the sea because the weather is very hot in summer and a little warm in winter.They can walk in the water like fish swim in the water.And no one will do the dull and heavy jobs.Machines will do these jobs.So people will have lots of free time and they can have a holiday.
Students won’t study in school.They will study at home with their computers.They will send their homework to their teachers by email.And they will talk to their teachers on their computers.
I think this dream will be true.So I must work and study hardly.
swim改为swiming,jobs改为work,因为不是具体的工作.with computer改为by,因为是在通过电脑,表方式.true改为cometrue,是梦想实现,而不是梦想是真实地.最后,hardly改为hard,是努力学习.