英语翻译Happy BirthdayToday is my birthday.I ask many friends to

英语翻译
Happy Birthday
Today is my birthday.I ask many friends to my house to paly with me .when I get up at noon ,a friend comes my home ,and he gets me a present.I open the box .I‘m very suprised,It's my favorite thing ,I wanted to buy it long long ago ,but I only have a little money,and their has a letter in it .It;s"happy birhtday ,my friend."on it.I'm very happy.It's twenty o'clock,the sky turn to black,We have a party,we are singing and dancing ,we also eat some food,we are very happy this night.It's twenty-four o'clock ,the birhday party end ,and my friends also will go home.I say"good bye"to them.and my friends is go back .What a funny day

Happy Birthday
生日快乐
Today is my birthday.
今天是我的生日
I ask many friends to my house to paly with me .
我邀请了很多朋友来我家跟我玩.
when I get up at noon ,a friend comes my home
我在中午起床,一位朋友来到我家
and he gets me a present.
他得到了我的礼物
* 我想这句写错了,应该是 he gives me a present (他送我一份礼物)
I open the box .I‘m very suprised,
我打开了盒子,我十分惊喜
It's my favorite thing ,I wanted to buy it long long ago ,
这是我最喜爱的东西,从很久以前我已经想买它了
but I only have a little money,and their has a letter in it
但我只有很少金钱,礼物里面还有一封信
'It;s"happy birhtday ,my friend."on it.I'm very happy.
信写住「生日快乐,我的朋友」.我十分高兴
It's twenty o'clock,the sky turn to black,
晚上八时,天空慢慢变黑了
We have a party,we are singing and dancing ,
我们举行派对,我们一起唱歌和跳舞
we also eat some food,we are very happy this night.
我们还吃了点东西,这个晚上大家都很高兴.
It's twenty-four o'clock ,the birhday party end ,and my friends also will go home.
到了零时,派对结束了,我的朋友也要回家了
I say"good bye"to them.and my friends is go back .What a funny day !
我和他们道别後,他们就走了.真是有趣的一天!
这篇文章的英文语法有点问题啊
Happy Birthday
Today is my birthday.I invite my friends to my house and play with me.When I get up at noon,one of my friends comes to my home and gives me a present.I open the box and it makes me very suprised because he give me one of my favorite thing.I want to buy it long time ago but I don't have much money at that time.In the box,there is a letter and he wrote "Happy Birthday,my friend" on it.At eight pm,the sky turns to black and we start our party.We sing,dance and eat some food together.The party end at midnight.I say goodbye to my friends and they go back home.It is a wonderful day!