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If I Were A Superwoman演讲稿

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If I Were A Superwoman演讲稿
if i were a superwoman,I would try my best to do something for the social.i'd like to do many,many things for people.
if i were a superwoman,i world help others sincerely.i world always think of others first.if an old man wanted to cross the road,i world run up and help him.if i saw someone falling into the river,i would jump into the river to save him.because i can swim well.if somewhere caught fire,i world rush into the burning house,and rescue out inside people.then i would put out the fire.maybe i would hurt myself,but I would be happy if they can be safe.i’d love to help people in trouble.
If I were a superwoman,I world take action to help the children in poor areas.they don’t have enough money to go to school.i want to appeal to all the people for donating to them.please give them a chance to go to school.
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If I Were A Superwoman演讲稿
if i were a superwoman,I would try my best to do something for the 【social【名词society】.
i'd like to do【 many,应该删去,这是中国英语的写法】many things for people.
if i were a superwoman,i【 world【 would 】
help others sincerely.i world【would 】
always think of【about】
others first.
if an old man wanted to cross the road,i world run up and help him.
if i saw someone falling into the river,i would jump into the river to save him.because i can swim well.
if somewhere caught fire,i world rush into the burning house,and rescue 【out删除】
inside people.then i would put out the fire.
maybe i would hurt myself,but I would be happy if they【 can be 改为were吧】safe.
i’d love to help people【who】 in trouble.
If I were a superwoman,I world take action【s】 to help the children in poor areas.they don’t have enough money to go to school.i want to appeal to all the people for donating to them.please give them a chance to go to school.
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