神马作文网请英语好手看两个英语造句是否有误
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请英语好手看两个英语造句是否有误
我自己根据题目造的句子,我自学新概念 ,没老师可以问,求教了
1 If.I will resign imdeately and I will take my wife to go around the world and read eveybook which I want to ,which I like to ,which I have kown of (or that?）so amzing so intersting ,so fascinating that I hven't read before.
2 If you study hard enough ,you will（or get in) be admitted one of the best of university(best后面在这一定要用of对吗 ）and you wil get (obtain) a job of well-paid
我自己根据题目造的句子,我自学新概念 ,没老师可以问,求教了
1 If.I will resign imdeately and I will take my wife to go around the world and read eveybook which I want to ,which I like to ,which I have kown of (or that?）so amzing so intersting ,so fascinating that I hven't read before.
2 If you study hard enough ,you will（or get in) be admitted one of the best of university(best后面在这一定要用of对吗 ）and you wil get (obtain) a job of well-paid
是用If造的句子是吧?首先你的句子里有很多错误的单词,也许是你手打的原因,你的句子我给改了一下,你看看：1.I will resign immediately and then go around the world with my wife, read the books I want and like and have known, which are very amazing ,interesting and fascinatic but I never read.
2.If you study hard enough, you will be admitted by one of the best universities and get a well-paid job.
我觉得没必要用那么多的of,有些形容词直接放到名词前面读起来反而更顺,用太多的介词容易把自己把读者都弄糊涂了.
再问： 感谢您的解答。。几个老师答的都很好 ，第一个句子 我本来想表达 我会立即辞职然后带上我妻子到世界各地走走 读那些我想读我喜欢读还有我所知道的那么多有趣和精彩的书 这样一个意思，自学能力有限 自己也感觉句子不通顺 谢谢你们了
2.If you study hard enough, you will be admitted by one of the best universities and get a well-paid job.
我觉得没必要用那么多的of,有些形容词直接放到名词前面读起来反而更顺,用太多的介词容易把自己把读者都弄糊涂了.
再问： 感谢您的解答。。几个老师答的都很好 ，第一个句子 我本来想表达 我会立即辞职然后带上我妻子到世界各地走走 读那些我想读我喜欢读还有我所知道的那么多有趣和精彩的书 这样一个意思，自学能力有限 自己也感觉句子不通顺 谢谢你们了