大家帮我改下2010年12月大学生英语六级的作文.权威和牛人进.最后给估个分.

大家帮我改下2010年12月大学生英语六级的作文.权威和牛人进.最后给估个分.
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你对大学排行的看法
1.目前高校排行十分盛行
2.很多人对高校排行的看法不一,一些人认为……
3.我的看法
recently,there have been arguments about whether we should or should not implement university ranking system while it has becom a prevailing phenomenon,which attracts students to go to top universities.
To begin with,it is an undeniable fact that good universities can offer nice equipments and excelllent academic atmosphere,which may be the one reason students prefer to go to good universities.
on the other hand,a critism(后来发现写错了应该是criticism)often heard these days is that students are excessively concerned about university ranking and ingore the essence of education,In the other words,a conundrum that students only pursue university ranking which is increasingly influencing our students' self-value.
Pesonally,I voice a support that good students will after students with more opportunities to promote their abilities which may put them in a decent position in the job hunting prospect.Thus,it is reasonable for some authorities to make their students recoginize their favorable universities.only in this way can we have a brilliant and prosperous future.
最后一段开头打错了 I voice a support that good universities.另外句首大写不用考虑了.随便打的..记住打分!另外看看有没有走题.

拜读大作,文章不错.微有瑕疵,大写改过,仅供参考：
Recently,there have been arguments about whether we should or should not implement university ranking system while it has becomE a prevailing phenomenon,which attracts students to go to top universities.
To begin with, it is an undeniable fact that good universities can offer nice equipments and excelllent academic atmosphere,which may be the reason FOR students TO prefer to go to good universities.
on the other hand, a critism(后来发现写错了应该是criticism)often heard these days is that students are excessively concerned about university ranking and ingore the essence of education,In the other words,a conundrum that students only pursue university ranking which is increasingly influencing our students' self-value.
PeRsonally,I voice a support that good students SHOULD BE SUPERIOR TO THE OTHER students with more opportunities to promote their abilities which may put them in a decent position in the job hunting prospect.Thus,it is reasonable for some authorities to make their students recoginize their favorable universities.only in this way can we have a brilliant and prosperous future.