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Dear friends
Here are my points. We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons and know little of society though it is not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up of that. Taking a port-time job is a good form of social practice. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability. Besides taking a part-time job, we can get paid. Thus I’ll say a student should take a part-time job in holidays, if possible, of course.
Dear friends
Here are my points. We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons and know little of society though it is not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up of that. Taking a port-time job is a good form of social practice. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability. Besides taking a part-time job, we can get paid. Thus I’ll say a student should take a part-time job in holidays, if possible, of course.
Dear friends
Here are my points.We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons so that we know little about society though it is not all our fault.So a holiday could be the best time for us to make up for that.As we know,taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice through which we can surely make progress with both knowledge and ability.Besides,we can get paid by means of taking a part-time job.Thus I’ll say a student should take a part-time job in holidays,if possible,of course.
Here are my points.We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons so that we know little about society though it is not all our fault.So a holiday could be the best time for us to make up for that.As we know,taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice through which we can surely make progress with both knowledge and ability.Besides,we can get paid by means of taking a part-time job.Thus I’ll say a student should take a part-time job in holidays,if possible,of course.