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我参加了希望之星英语风采大赛,写了以前演讲稿,但觉得语法、单词有些不妥,想请朋友们帮我改一下!明天就要了,

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我参加了希望之星英语风采大赛,写了以前演讲稿,但觉得语法、单词有些不妥,想请朋友们帮我改一下!明天就要了,
原稿:
Hello,everyone.
My name is sherry,I am a happy girl.This is really a great honor to have this opportunity,and I believe I can make good performance today.
In school,my favorite class is computer,because I think the computer is very important,so I usually play computer in my spare time.
I like watch anime very much,especially .I often watch it in my home.To remember in this anime have an important person,he has a pet phrase “You still have lots more to work on”.I thing this person is very self-confident and I like this anime very much.
What about you?Do you like him?
That’s all,thanks so much for your listening.I wish we can meet again!
我参加的是小学组。
我参加了希望之星英语风采大赛,写了以前演讲稿,但觉得语法、单词有些不妥,想请朋友们帮我改一下!明天就要了,
Hello, everyone.
My name is sherry, I am a happy girl. It's my honor to be here, and I believe I can make good performance today.
In school, my favorite class is computer, because I think aquiaring some computer knowledge is very important, and I usually play the computer in my spare time.
I like watching anime very much, especially . I often watch it at home. In this anime there is an important person, he has a pet phrase “You still have lots more to work on”. I thing this person is very self-confident and I like this anime very much.
What about you? Do you like him?
That’s all, thanks so much for your listening. I wish we can meet again!