神马作文网请帮我修改下面这篇英语文章,包括语法和单词
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请帮我修改下面这篇英语文章,包括语法和单词
Hello,everyone.My name is Wan Li.In Chinese,that means ten thousand Li.I’m very glad to stand here to share my speech with you.Today I’m going to talk about my story.
It was a quiet night.After having supper,I came to my study to review lessons for tomorrow's final exams.
However,while I was working hard,the house had a sudden power cut.I looked around blankly and didn’t know what to do.When I realized what happened,I was angry enough to keep complaining loudly.My father heard that and then walked into the study.“Dear my son,cursing the darkness isn’t what you got to do now.Lighting a candle is more helpful,” said my father.He put a candle and a lighter in my hand.I lighted it and the room became much brighter.
Similary,in the face of life ,what we need is not to blindly complain ,but to take action to light the hope.This story taught me a lot.
That's all.Thank you!
Hello,everyone.My name is Wan Li.In Chinese,that means ten thousand Li.I’m very glad to stand here to share my speech with you.Today I’m going to talk about my story.
It was a quiet night.After having supper,I came to my study to review lessons for tomorrow's final exams.
However,while I was working hard,the house had a sudden power cut.I looked around blankly and didn’t know what to do.When I realized what happened,I was angry enough to keep complaining loudly.My father heard that and then walked into the study.“Dear my son,cursing the darkness isn’t what you got to do now.Lighting a candle is more helpful,” said my father.He put a candle and a lighter in my hand.I lighted it and the room became much brighter.
Similary,in the face of life ,what we need is not to blindly complain ,but to take action to light the hope.This story taught me a lot.
That's all.Thank you!
Hello,everyone.My name is Wan Li.In Chinese,the first character stands for ten thousand.I’m very glad to stand here to have a speech.Today I’m going to talk about my story.
It was a quiet night.After having supper,I came to my study to review lessons for tomorrow's final exams.
However,while I was working hard,the house had a sudden power cut.I looked around surprisedly and didn’t know what to do.When I realized what happened,I was angry and keep complaining loudly.My father heard that,then walked into the study.“Sweetheart,cursing the darkness isn’t what you are going to do now.Lighting a candle is more reasonable,” said my father.He put a candle and a lighter in my hand.I lighted it and the room became much brighter.
Similary,in the face of life ,what we need is not to complain blindly,but to take action to light the hope.This experience really gave me a lesson.
That's all.Thank you!
再问： 可以把你修改的部分做下说明吗？
再答： 总体来说写的还是不错的。
第一段就是对“万”的解释，可以加上Literally表示字面上的。Speech with you是没有这种说法，只能give a speech。
第三段blankly，我推测你应该指的是头脑空白，blankly可以，但是surprisedly表达的意思更为准确一些。angry enough to keep complaining loudly，这个表达的不是太准确。cursing the darkness，诅咒改为grumbling（发牢骚）更好。light的过去式是lit.
It was a quiet night.After having supper,I came to my study to review lessons for tomorrow's final exams.
However,while I was working hard,the house had a sudden power cut.I looked around surprisedly and didn’t know what to do.When I realized what happened,I was angry and keep complaining loudly.My father heard that,then walked into the study.“Sweetheart,cursing the darkness isn’t what you are going to do now.Lighting a candle is more reasonable,” said my father.He put a candle and a lighter in my hand.I lighted it and the room became much brighter.
Similary,in the face of life ,what we need is not to complain blindly,but to take action to light the hope.This experience really gave me a lesson.
That's all.Thank you!
再问： 可以把你修改的部分做下说明吗？
再答： 总体来说写的还是不错的。
第一段就是对“万”的解释，可以加上Literally表示字面上的。Speech with you是没有这种说法，只能give a speech。
第三段blankly，我推测你应该指的是头脑空白，blankly可以，但是surprisedly表达的意思更为准确一些。angry enough to keep complaining loudly，这个表达的不是太准确。cursing the darkness，诅咒改为grumbling（发牢骚）更好。light的过去式是lit.
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