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紧急!英文高手进,帮我改这篇短文
This is a wonderful book,the Secret Garden.The story was written by Frances.It tell us a girl who named Mary is a sorriness girl.No one like her.She was sent to Yorkshire when hie parents died.She lived with his uncle in a very big and old house.In this house,she felt lonely and fidgety.In the sequel,she heard of the Secret Garden.Her lifehad a great change.In the end,everything would turn into beauty.
还有You don't know I am to like this book how!（你不知道我是多么喜欢这本书!）这句话是对是错?
This is a wonderful book,the Secret Garden.The story was written by Frances.It tell us a girl who named Mary is a sorriness girl.No one like her.She was sent to Yorkshire when hie parents died.She lived with his uncle in a very big and old house.In this house,she felt lonely and fidgety.In the sequel,she heard of the Secret Garden.Her lifehad a great change.In the end,everything would turn into beauty.
还有You don't know I am to like this book how!（你不知道我是多么喜欢这本书!）这句话是对是错?
1、第一行It tell -> It tells It后动词要用第三人称单数.
2、第二行Mary is a sorriness girl -> Mary was a pitiful girl
叙述书中内容要用一般过去时.
3、第二行No one like her.->No one liked her.
4、第二行when hie parents died -> when her parents died.拼写错误.
5、第四行everything would turn into beauty ->everything turned into beauty.此处不需过去将来时,用一般过去时就可以.
另外最后一句话应说成：You don't know how I love this book!
其他错误若没有看出请谅解.
2、第二行Mary is a sorriness girl -> Mary was a pitiful girl
叙述书中内容要用一般过去时.
3、第二行No one like her.->No one liked her.
4、第二行when hie parents died -> when her parents died.拼写错误.
5、第四行everything would turn into beauty ->everything turned into beauty.此处不需过去将来时,用一般过去时就可以.
另外最后一句话应说成：You don't know how I love this book!
其他错误若没有看出请谅解.