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我写的一篇英语作文帮麻烦修改下,
看下哪些句子有语法错误,哪些句子写的不好,写的部好麻烦帮我改下.
我英语成绩非常烂,麻烦修改详细点啊
千万不要像语法书上那样讲我看不懂
My school
My school was very terrible.turning on the light is not allowed in the daytime.Some students wan to turn on the light.because the eyes of them was not good and （看不清黑板）.（如果我们把打开了 被学校发现就会罚款）
The WC of school was very very terrible.No water and nobody clean.Eery time I went there want to vomit.
Many teachers of school was not duty to us.So many students’ grades was very terrible amd they always got a D this term.
我英语老师部管我们,我好跑到这里来了.这是我今天上课发牢骚写的.内容是真实的哦
括号里面的句子是我不会写的
看下哪些句子有语法错误,哪些句子写的不好,写的部好麻烦帮我改下.
我英语成绩非常烂,麻烦修改详细点啊
千万不要像语法书上那样讲我看不懂
My school
My school was very terrible.turning on the light is not allowed in the daytime.Some students wan to turn on the light.because the eyes of them was not good and （看不清黑板）.（如果我们把打开了 被学校发现就会罚款）
The WC of school was very very terrible.No water and nobody clean.Eery time I went there want to vomit.
Many teachers of school was not duty to us.So many students’ grades was very terrible amd they always got a D this term.
我英语老师部管我们,我好跑到这里来了.这是我今天上课发牢骚写的.内容是真实的哦
括号里面的句子是我不会写的
如果是介绍学校的作文,最好用一般现在时.所以第一句最好改成“My school is very terrible."
看不清黑板的： we can not look blackboard clearly.
如果我们把打开了 被学校发现就会罚款:If terned onthe light ,we would be fined .
"nobody clean "改成 “nobody is empolyeed to clean it ."
温馨提示：同学,你的英语纯粹是中文版,希望你能先学好基本功.
希望对你有帮助!
看不清黑板的： we can not look blackboard clearly.
如果我们把打开了 被学校发现就会罚款:If terned onthe light ,we would be fined .
"nobody clean "改成 “nobody is empolyeed to clean it ."
温馨提示：同学,你的英语纯粹是中文版,希望你能先学好基本功.
希望对你有帮助!