英语翻译81.我去书店的路上碰见一位老朋友.I gone across an old friend on the way

英语翻译
81.我去书店的路上碰见一位老朋友.
I gone across an old friend on the way of going book store.
82.他弟弟刚上火车,火车就开动了.
As soon his brother had onto tain,it was going.
83.那位年轻人正站在那儿看墙上的一幅画.
These younger is standing for looking a paint which is hang on the wall.
84.她花了约一个多小时才把这道数学题做出来.
Her spent almost an hour on having done this mathematical problem..
85.听说约翰的另一部小说明年就要出版.
It was hearded that Johan’s another nevol will issue next year.
86.玛丽在她母亲回家前把房间打扫干净了.
Marly had cleaned the room before her mother attrived home.
87.他小时候梦想成为一名足球明星.
When he was a little boy,he wished that he become a star of football.
88.我想她很快就会把消息传给全班同学.
I thought that he would send the message to all classmeter.Soon.
89.他们设法为这项工程筹到了足够资金.
They have tried to get enough money for this project.
90.我们非常喜欢这座城市,想再呆一个月.
We like this city very much and want still to stay one month.

81.我去书店的路上碰见一位老朋友.
I gone across an old friend on the way of going book store.
【gone是过去分词,这里应该过去式,而且是应该是came across; 后面改way to the book store】
82.他弟弟刚上火车,火车就开动了.
As soon his brother had onto tain,it was going.
【as soon不是这么用的.这句改成The train left soon after his brother boarded.】
83.那位年轻人正站在那儿看墙上的一幅画.
These younger is standing for looking a paint which is hang on the wall.
【首先,那位是单数.This young man is standing over there,looking at a picture on the wall 两个动作stand和look,我们用一个分词形式来表示同时动作】
84.她花了约一个多小时才把这道数学题做出来.
Her spent almost an hour on having done this mathematical problem..
【第一个错误,主格是She不是her.解出题目用solve这个动词,另外,这句话也可以用It took her an hour to.】
85.听说约翰的另一部小说明年就要出版.
It was hearded that Johan’s another nevol will issue next year.
【It was后面用said而不是hearded,约翰的另一部小说 another novel of John,不要issue而是publish,而且要被动态will be published】
86.玛丽在她母亲回家前把房间打扫干净了.
Marly had cleaned the room before her mother attrived home.
【是Mary不是Marly.其他基本正确,回家用came home不是更好么】
87.他小时候梦想成为一名足球明星.
When he was a little boy,he wished that he become a star of football.
【这句话改成he wished to become a football star,也可以wished that he could become a football star】
88.我想她很快就会把消息传给全班同学.
I thought that he would send the message to all classmeter.Soon.
【“我想”是现在的动作,所以I think.第二,注意是she.第三 soon放that后面,classmate拼错了而且要复数 I think that soon she will spread the message to all the classmates】
89.他们设法为这项工程筹到了足够资金.
They have tried to get enough money for this project.
【筹款最好用raise这个动词,另外,把try换成manage,因为最后这件事情是做成功的.】
90.我们非常喜欢这座城市,想再呆一个月.
We like this city very much and want still to stay one month.
【如果你想用一句话来表述,用so.that的结构更好 We like this city so much that we want to stay for another month/stay for one more month】