神马作文网【急】帮忙看下有无语法错误!
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【急】帮忙看下有无语法错误!
sits on the chair,and turns his head to the way that his son goes away.He didn’t say anything
坐在椅子上,头朝向他儿子走的方向.他什么也没说.（他的儿子是刚刚摔门而出的）
尤其是里面那个定语从句.
还有这一句
The sound of a door shutting is heard from out.
关门的声音从门外传来
这个是一个剧本的补充说明。
原文是这样的：
Son(cries more fierce and shouted at his father)That’s just your estate!Not my and my mom’s!(crise much more fiercer.Then he turns back and opens the door,then ran out.The sound of a door shutting is heard from out.)
Father:…(sits on the chair,and turns his head to the way that his son goes away.He didn’t say anything)
sits on the chair,and turns his head to the way that his son goes away.He didn’t say anything
坐在椅子上,头朝向他儿子走的方向.他什么也没说.（他的儿子是刚刚摔门而出的）
尤其是里面那个定语从句.
还有这一句
The sound of a door shutting is heard from out.
关门的声音从门外传来
这个是一个剧本的补充说明。
原文是这样的：
Son(cries more fierce and shouted at his father)That’s just your estate!Not my and my mom’s!(crise much more fiercer.Then he turns back and opens the door,then ran out.The sound of a door shutting is heard from out.)
Father:…(sits on the chair,and turns his head to the way that his son goes away.He didn’t say anything)
Son(cries more fierce(应为副词fiercely） and shouted at his father)
That’s just your estate!Not my（应为名词性物主代词mine） and my mom’s!(crise（是楼主你打错了?-cries） much more fiercer（fierce是单音节词,因此比较级不用more,但此处同上,应用副词,所以应改成much more fiercely）
Then he turns back and opens the door,then ran（注：此句前面是一般现在时的turns和opens,但是后半部分又用了一般过去式,不符时态,应改成runs） out.
（The sound of a door shutting is heard from out（out是形容词,应为outside）.）
Father:…(sits on（如果是有扶手或有靠背的椅子用in,板凳才用on,根据此处语境,他爸爸应该是靠在靠背上的,所以改成in） the chair,and turns his head to the way that（此处的定语从句前后不缺成分,应用副词where） his son goes away.He didn’t（又是时态不一致,用doesn't） say anything)
楼主请确定好你要用的时态,要么全篇用一般现在时,要么用一般过去时,时态不要混杂.
That’s just your estate!Not my（应为名词性物主代词mine） and my mom’s!(crise（是楼主你打错了?-cries） much more fiercer（fierce是单音节词,因此比较级不用more,但此处同上,应用副词,所以应改成much more fiercely）
Then he turns back and opens the door,then ran（注：此句前面是一般现在时的turns和opens,但是后半部分又用了一般过去式,不符时态,应改成runs） out.
（The sound of a door shutting is heard from out（out是形容词,应为outside）.）
Father:…(sits on（如果是有扶手或有靠背的椅子用in,板凳才用on,根据此处语境,他爸爸应该是靠在靠背上的,所以改成in） the chair,and turns his head to the way that（此处的定语从句前后不缺成分,应用副词where） his son goes away.He didn’t（又是时态不一致,用doesn't） say anything)
楼主请确定好你要用的时态,要么全篇用一般现在时,要么用一般过去时,时态不要混杂.