写一篇Gadgets and Self Reliance作文

写一篇Gadgets and Self Reliance作文
主题：PROMPT:"Our increasing reliance on high-tech gadgets will eventually make us less able to take care of ourselves."
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this opinion.Support your views with specific reasons and examples from your own experience,observations,or reading.
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作文里面要求写到
Topic sentence( Reason #1)
Example 1
Support Detail


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Gadgets and Self Reliance
High-tech gadgets make our life and work more and more convenient,but will not ventually make us less able to take care of ourselves.Nowadays,we are living in a morden world with lots of high-tech gadgets around.The birth of mobile phones makes us be able to talk to friends and family in another place.Computers make our jobs become easier and more efficient,and machines can help save laour and improve productivity.The adavantages can not be counted.
However,some people think that our increasing reliance on high-tech gadgets will eventually make us less able to take care of ourselves.I don't agree.The gadgets help us do some work which is difficlut and dangerous,but it doesn't mean we will not need to work.We are just living another lifestyle.People still need to work on themselves to get what they want and realize their dreams.We will find a better and healthier way to live with nature.
再问： 太感谢了，还能帮我在些一点吗？不知上面那段那段是example和那段是support detail
Example 1, Support Detail 看上面的相片 我已经补充问题了 万分感谢！
再答： Gadgets and Self Reliance
Introduction：Nowadays, we are living in a morden world with lots of high-tech gadgets around.
Statement：High-tech gadgets make our life and work more and more convenient, but will not ventually make us less able to take care of ourselves.
Some people think that our increasing reliance on high-tech gadgets
will eventually make us less able to take care of ourselves. I don't
agree.
再答： 1. The birth of mobile phones makes us be able to talk to friends and
family in another place. It does not mean that we are not able to take
care of oursleves. We still get togther with family and friends, and are
able to talk to them face to face.
2. Computers make our
jobs become easier and more efficient, we can still think in our own
way. We just use a easier way to get the result.
3. Machines can help save laour and improve productivity. The gadgets help us do some work which is difficlut and dangerous, but
it doesn't mean we will not need to work.
Conclusion:
The gadgets are sure useful and efficient. We can go to better places
with convenient transportation, but still walk sometimes. We are just
living another
lifestyle. People still need to work on themselves to get what they want
and realize their dreams. We will find a better and healthier way to
live with nature.
再问： 感谢，在问问你写的1，2，3是指example，topic Sentence还是Support detail.