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帮我看下这段话有什么语法错误或者有什么需要修改的

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帮我看下这段话有什么语法错误或者有什么需要修改的
You said
You have been loving me for ten years and the moment I said "Yes,I'll be with you!" you were crazy.
You said meeting me has run out of all your fortune .
You said I could set my heart at rest and you would be responsible for me while I was facing the biggest embarrassment in
my life.
I want to believe this words,but at first I want to know whether these words are ture.
帮我看下这段话有什么语法错误或者有什么需要修改的
I see nothing wrong except this" I want to believe this words".just change "this" to "these" and eliminate"at" in "but at first I want to know whether these words are ture."