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是关于电影《录取通知书》（Accepted）的,大家看看有没有什么语病,或者哪些地方可以改成更出彩的表述.但不要提什么重写之类的建议.
Review on Accepted
The movie Accepted is filled with humor andinspiration,but at the same time,it reflects some defects in the currenteducation system,which induces us to rethink bearings of our education.
What do you think when you hear a student,rejected by many colleges,want to establish a university by himself?At leastfor me,this crazy idea in Bartleby Gaines’s brain seems ridiculous and evenironic.But the final success of this idea implies that in some circumstances,we can’t succeed just because we lack courage to imagine.In fact,we don’tknow what we can do until we have an idea (even it seems stupid) and try it.Justas Victor Hugo said,“idea is everything”.In a word,having an idea is thefirst step and foundation of our success whatever we do.
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Review on Accepted
The movie Accepted is filled with humor andinspiration,but at the same time,it reflects some defects in the currenteducation system,which induces us to rethink bearings of our education.
What do you think when you hear a student,rejected by many colleges,want to establish a university by himself?At leastfor me,this crazy idea in Bartleby Gaines’s brain seems ridiculous and evenironic.But the final success of this idea implies that in some circumstances,we can’t succeed just because we lack courage to imagine.In fact,we don’tknow what we can do until we have an idea (even it seems stupid) and try it.Justas Victor Hugo said,“idea is everything”.In a word,having an idea is thefirst step and foundation of our success whatever we do.
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attaches greater importance to getting good grades than to simulating creativity.
value creativity rather than grades.
it's time for our education system to (advocate?不太好吧?)
provides us a fresth point of view.and leads us to think, not just attracts eyes with grand scenes.
That's all I could find.
We are the SHIT heads now, and none of what you stamp or sign or do will take that away. So go!
value creativity rather than grades.
it's time for our education system to (advocate?不太好吧?)
provides us a fresth point of view.and leads us to think, not just attracts eyes with grand scenes.
That's all I could find.
We are the SHIT heads now, and none of what you stamp or sign or do will take that away. So go!
是关于电影《录取通知书》（Accepted）的,大家看看有没有什么语病,或者哪些地方可以改成更出彩的表述.但不要提什么重
是关于电影《录取通知书》（Accepted）的,大家看看有没有什么语病,或者哪些地方可以改成更出彩的表述.
下面是一则关于父亲的英语作文,帮我看看有没有什么语法错误,或者有些句子改成更地道的表达?
美国电影《录取通知书》英文影评（高中水品，要大约100到200字左右，不要抄袭的）
看什么电影可以帮助提高英语口语呢~或者有没有什么英语角可以推荐的
作文：接到录取通知书是在初中-高中时接到的字数700字左右要全文!因为本人拿到通知书后米有什么感觉
英语翻译“收到大学的录取通知书”在翻译的时候,使用matriculation 还是admission?这两个有什么区别啊
有没有关于“潜意识”的书或者是电影?
有没有什么比较唯美的作文题目和句子,但不要是关于爱情的
帮我看看这篇作文吧,看看有没有什么语法错误,或者有什么地方可以改进的.
大家帮我看看这个雅思作文的开头有没有问题,语法或者可以更好的表达,不要改变我的大致意思.thx~
哪位英语高手能帮我看看我的邮件有没有什么语病,