神马作文网【高悬赏】挑这一篇短文的语法错误
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【高悬赏】挑这一篇短文的语法错误
But they are not willing to speak afraid to drag the inconvenience we fear will bring us
However, some heartless people often do not care no intention of them
Wished for them to hurry away from their lives
So I hope that we can love more than a little more time to focus on care for the people around you
I hope you remember:
Good will be rewarded.
I just hope in this world, there are more people to pay attention to those less fortunate in life
Look at their lives
Look at our own lives do we still complain about the qualifications
As the saying goes, "bigger cages, and what the birds have"
But I hope that more good people, to always help the people around us
Helping others is a good quality
Is five thousand years the Chinese people to the highest quality
Hope you lot to help people
请指出并改正.
But they are not willing to speak afraid to drag the inconvenience we fear will bring us
However, some heartless people often do not care no intention of them
Wished for them to hurry away from their lives
So I hope that we can love more than a little more time to focus on care for the people around you
I hope you remember:
Good will be rewarded.
I just hope in this world, there are more people to pay attention to those less fortunate in life
Look at their lives
Look at our own lives do we still complain about the qualifications
As the saying goes, "bigger cages, and what the birds have"
But I hope that more good people, to always help the people around us
Helping others is a good quality
Is five thousand years the Chinese people to the highest quality
Hope you lot to help people
请指出并改正.
(╯﹏╰)b,实在“狗屁不通”,我只能慢慢帮你改了~!有些错误用词,我直接帮你改了.
【人工精心修改资料,!】
but they are not willing to speak the inconvenience of dangrous drags which bring us panic.
However,some careless people will often neglect the potential damager existing in these drags.
(Wished for them to hurry away from their lives这句话实在看不懂意思,狗屁不通~!）
揣测翻译：wish those people who is now busy with works need obey the rules i recommand you as follow:
In fact,I hope everyone who can save our teasure time to pay attention to other kinds of people who needs us to help.
And I also want to mention you (that) to be good will be rewarded finally.
I also wishes,in this world,more and more people will concern about some unfortunted people,cheering up those who needs living with happiness as well.
Looking around us,someone will complain the quality of his life.
Just like the saying goes:"bigger cages,and what the birds have"
but i hope more and more generous people will help the poors around us.
Actually,help is a good virtue which have been adored for Chinese people for five thousands years.
By and large,I hope everyone wil to be a good person who will help others.
,终于大功告成了,对了,忘了说：
1、首先,英语翻译要遵从当地文化习俗,不能按照中国语言乱套.
2、基本上你的文章可以说是“支离破碎”,没有成句,根本没有语法可言~!╮(╯▽╰)╭
3、我在原意的基础上帮你修改了“用词不当”,“语法改错”等方面的问题.
嗯,差不多了,!记得,加我100分~!
【人工精心修改资料,!】
but they are not willing to speak the inconvenience of dangrous drags which bring us panic.
However,some careless people will often neglect the potential damager existing in these drags.
(Wished for them to hurry away from their lives这句话实在看不懂意思,狗屁不通~!）
揣测翻译：wish those people who is now busy with works need obey the rules i recommand you as follow:
In fact,I hope everyone who can save our teasure time to pay attention to other kinds of people who needs us to help.
And I also want to mention you (that) to be good will be rewarded finally.
I also wishes,in this world,more and more people will concern about some unfortunted people,cheering up those who needs living with happiness as well.
Looking around us,someone will complain the quality of his life.
Just like the saying goes:"bigger cages,and what the birds have"
but i hope more and more generous people will help the poors around us.
Actually,help is a good virtue which have been adored for Chinese people for five thousands years.
By and large,I hope everyone wil to be a good person who will help others.
,终于大功告成了,对了,忘了说：
1、首先,英语翻译要遵从当地文化习俗,不能按照中国语言乱套.
2、基本上你的文章可以说是“支离破碎”,没有成句,根本没有语法可言~!╮(╯▽╰)╭
3、我在原意的基础上帮你修改了“用词不当”,“语法改错”等方面的问题.
嗯,差不多了,!记得,加我100分~!