初二英语Write a letter to the Sunday Mail and express your opini

初二英语Write a letter to the Sunday Mail and express your opinion
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Write a letter to the Sunday Mail and express your opinion.
Dear Sir or Madam,I think /believe that _______.I agree/disagree that _________.I think it is fair/unfair for children to ____________________.I think children should/should not ____ because ___________.For example,they should/should not________ because ________.Yours truly,_________ 是自己写的.

①I think that children should have enough spare tme.
I disagree that children have too much home work.
I think it is unfair for children to be so tired when they are so young,
I think children should have enough time to do what they like .
Because knowledge is not everything.
For example, they should do some sports and spend more time with their parents.
Because a healthy body and a happy family are very important .

②Dear Sir or Madam,
I think that middle school students have too much pressure from school.And I agree that there is no need for them to get so much homework to do.And I think it is unfair for children to stay up doing their homework late .In addition,I think children should have the enough rights to study and relax because only in this way can make them live happily without any pressure.But they should also pay some attention to spending the time on schoolwork in order to keep their grades at a good level.For example, they should do some homework first and after finishing,they can relax for couple of hours and then continue their homework.Because the more homework they have to do,the more pressure they will have,so it is beneficial for them to relax a little.And these are my suggestions.
Yours truly,Mike
亲爱的先生或女士,
我认为中学学生从学校的压力太大了.我认为,他们不需要太多的作业要做.我认为孩子们熬夜做作业是不公平的.另外,我认为孩子应该和放松,因为只有这样才能让他们没有任何压力,生活快乐学习足够的权利.但是他们也应该注意花时间学习以保持他们的成绩在良好水平.例如,他们应该做一些功课首先完成后,他们可以放松几个小时,然后继续他们的作业.因为他们必须做更多的功课,他们将有更多的压力,所以这对他们是有益的放松了一点.这是我的建议.