神马作文网短文改错 有十处 怎么改?
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短文改错 有十处 怎么改?
while playing near my home
I noice a turkey with its head under a rock
It looked stuck
My friends and I watched a while
But the bird couldn't free it
I ran home and told my mother
and we decided to call the bird rescue center
when the rescue workers arrived
she helped the bird out from under a rock
She checked to see that its wings were OK
or if it had any wounds or breaking bones
It was only being skinny from not eating
The worker said the turkey would be set freely if it fully recovered
If not
it would stay at the center
After leaving she thanked my mom and me for calling
while playing near my home
I noice a turkey with its head under a rock
It looked stuck
My friends and I watched a while
But the bird couldn't free it
I ran home and told my mother
and we decided to call the bird rescue center
when the rescue workers arrived
she helped the bird out from under a rock
She checked to see that its wings were OK
or if it had any wounds or breaking bones
It was only being skinny from not eating
The worker said the turkey would be set freely if it fully recovered
If not
it would stay at the center
After leaving she thanked my mom and me for calling
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