请大家帮忙修改下如下的句子
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请大家帮忙修改下如下的句子
The most troublesome problem is that heat generated by the chip cannot discharge as fast as we expect.
特别是discharge 和fast的使用,我想表达的是“热量不能散发得如我们期待的那样快”
The most troublesome problem is that heat generated by the chip cannot discharge as fast as we expect.
特别是discharge 和fast的使用,我想表达的是“热量不能散发得如我们期待的那样快”
discharge 是“(电、热)散发出” 或 “放出(电、热)”的意思,和generate 意思相近.
所以,宜改为:
The most troublesome problem is that the heat generated by the chip cannot dissipate as fast as we have expected.
另外,heat 是特指的,指“芯片发出的那些热量”,故需要定冠词;“我们期待的”要用现在完成时.
再问: 为什么要用现在完成时呢?
再答: “期待”这个动作先于“热量散发”,表示“之前我们已经有所期待”,对现在有影响,所以用现在完成时更好。 请参考: The news didn't travel as fast as we had expected. (这消息传播得不如我们所预料的那样快。) 【主句是一般过去时,从句是过去完成时】 也可以直接用expected,即 as fast as expected,这样表达简洁了,还避免了选择时态的问题。
所以,宜改为:
The most troublesome problem is that the heat generated by the chip cannot dissipate as fast as we have expected.
另外,heat 是特指的,指“芯片发出的那些热量”,故需要定冠词;“我们期待的”要用现在完成时.
再问: 为什么要用现在完成时呢?
再答: “期待”这个动作先于“热量散发”,表示“之前我们已经有所期待”,对现在有影响,所以用现在完成时更好。 请参考: The news didn't travel as fast as we had expected. (这消息传播得不如我们所预料的那样快。) 【主句是一般过去时,从句是过去完成时】 也可以直接用expected,即 as fast as expected,这样表达简洁了,还避免了选择时态的问题。