英语作文求修改.Some people think that parents should teach children

英语作文求修改.
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others,however,believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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As we all know that in the childhood is the footstep of human’s life.To be a good member of society is not only an important ability but also a crucial part in a people’s life.So,there are two ways to be good members of society.
Some people think that parents should teach children.This is a correct way.A saying said that partents are good teachers for children.Parents know more children’s advantage and disadvantage than others,so it’s really convenient to do so.
However,some people strongly reckon that school is the place to learn this.This opinion also has its benefits.Human are social animals.To give a place for children also means giving a chance to improve their communication ability and expression ability,which makes children more creative to be a good society member.
I think we need an enviroment to grow and also need peoper activities to express ourselves.So I tend to the second opinion.But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill,it needs more experience.It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility ofr helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.

1.As we all know that in the childhood is the footstep of human’s life这句话中that容易误解,建议改为As we all know,that in the childhood is the footstep of human’s life.
2.but also a crucial part in a people’s life people 为复数名词,做单数名词时译为民族,改为 person's 或者去掉a
3.A saying said that partents are good teachers for children.建议改为 As an English saying goes:"parents are good teachers for children."
4. Parents know more children’s advantage and disadvantage 建议改为 Parents know more about children’s advantages and disadvantages
5.which makes children more creative 建议把creative 改为likely
6.need peoper activities to express ourselves peoper 改为proper
7.take responsibility ofr helping 改为take responsibility for helping
8.become active and able members of that society 中able 建议改为capable
感觉水平蛮高的,词汇量也挺大,不定式作主语用的最多,错误不多,很不错啊