神马作文网后天考试了·今天检查作文发现有一小段好像写的有问题~有没有高手帮我改改··我总觉得语法有很大错!麻烦
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后天考试了·今天检查作文发现有一小段好像写的有问题~有没有高手帮我改改··我总觉得语法有很大错!麻烦
The present signal is unmistakable:our teachers and parents are obsessed with an idea of making their children working hard and ignore to communicate with them,while they often can not express themselves clearly.What is worse,the bias and suspicion between the parents and children become a serious social issue.Youths,who all like to use the networking language,have a speedy expansion of its number .
The present signal is unmistakable:our teachers and parents are obsessed with an idea of making their children working hard and ignore to communicate with them,while they often can not express themselves clearly.What is worse,the bias and suspicion between the parents and children become a serious social issue.Youths,who all like to use the networking language,have a speedy expansion of its number .
大作拜读,文理通顺,略有瑕疵,大写改过,仅供参考：
The present signal is unmistakable: our teachers and parents are obsessed with an idea of making their children WORK hard and ignore THE COMMUNICATION with them,while they often CANNOT express themselves clearly.What is worse,the bias and suspicion between the parents and children become a serious social issue. Youths,who all like to use the networking language,HAS a speedy expansion of its number .
The present signal is unmistakable: our teachers and parents are obsessed with an idea of making their children WORK hard and ignore THE COMMUNICATION with them,while they often CANNOT express themselves clearly.What is worse,the bias and suspicion between the parents and children become a serious social issue. Youths,who all like to use the networking language,HAS a speedy expansion of its number .
后天考试了·今天检查作文发现有一小段好像写的有问题~有没有高手帮我改改··我总觉得语法有很大错!麻烦
后天考试了·今天检查作文发现有一小段好像写的有问题~有没有高手帮我改改··我总觉得语法有很大错!
英语高手帮我看看这段文字有没有问题吧,总觉得怪怪的~
我写了一封英文信,大家帮我看看,有没有格式和语法错误的,帮我改改
我写了一封英文信,但是英语不大好,有没有人帮我改改语法之类的,
哪位高人能帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有语法问题,帮我改改
哪位帮我想一想,我的作文里有一句话,老师说有问题,麻烦帮我改改
帮我检查下这篇英语作文有没有语法上的错误,谢了
请帮我看一下我写的这一小段有没有语法或者用词的错误,
请会英语的高手,帮我看看这篇自我介绍有没有语法或单词错误,有的话帮我改改..再帮我润色一下
麻烦有英语好的帮我改改作文吧,我语法不好,估计错误会很多~
各位高手帮我检查这个作文有没有语法性或者不流畅的地方啊!