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高中英语作文修改请关注一下介词的使用,本人对介词的使用一直很迷糊……还有固定短语的使用……谢谢……1.In 2010,t

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高中英语作文修改
请关注一下介词的使用,本人对介词的使用一直很迷糊……
还有固定短语的使用……谢谢……
1.In 2010,there are nearly 34 million private cars possessed by chinese family,which is the five times as many as the number of 2000.(在2010年,中国家庭拥有的私家车的数量达到近3400万量,这一数字是2000年的五倍.)
2.So as to facilitate go-off,more and more poeple choose to have a car when they could afford it.(为了方便出行,越来越多的人选择在他们能过承担得起的时候购置私家车.)
3.One the other hand,having a car means not only an easy travel but also a more flexible timetable for one's business.(另一方面,私家车不仅意味这方便的出行,还意味着更加灵活的时间安排.)
4.Goverment should carry out more measures to keep a harmonious and safe circustance for car ownership in China.(政府应该采取更多措施来为私家车主们提供一个安全和谐的环境.)
5.it is that the transportation system should be improved to be fit for today's actuality that must be done immediately.(改进交通系统来适应现状是现在急需做的.这一句是想用强调句型的 ……)
高中英语作文修改请关注一下介词的使用,本人对介词的使用一直很迷糊……还有固定短语的使用……谢谢……1.In 2010,t
1.which和先行词离太远了,看得人会以为是非限制性定语从句——which指代前面整句话,以后写作注意下.我写的话我会这样写:...family,and the number is five times as many as that of 2000.仅供参考
2.so as to do sth.没错的
3.on one hand ...on the other hand...一方面.另一方面
4.语法没错,两单词错了:government ; circumstance
5.强调句用错,It is+adj.that+句子,所以应改成It is urgent that the transportation system should be improved to be fit for today's actuality.