英语作文请帮忙修改七八年没看过英语了,都忘了,有任何问题的麻烦指出来,Advertisements:Good or Ba

英语作文请帮忙修改
七八年没看过英语了,都忘了,有任何问题的麻烦指出来,
Advertisements:Good or Bad
Nowadays,advertisement is a very common medium in our daily life.We can get it though TV,see it at bus station or show window of department store,and listen it from radio.Our daily life is filled with various advertisements which can provide useful information to us.In a word,advertisement is playing a very important role in our daily life.
People have different opinion to advertisement.Some people welcome advertisement because they think advertisement can make them more convenient.When new products appear on the market,the people can know the function of the new products through advertisements and evaluate them.But some people hold the negative view.They think many advertisements amplified the merits of products and condense the defect of products.Besides,during we watching a very attractive TV program or a basketball game,advertisements always disturb us.
My point is that we should welcome advertisements because they actually make our daily life more convenient.But meanwhile,we have to confine their disadvantages to the lowest level,and utilize their advantages.Broadcasting advertisements on appropriate time,through appropriate medium and by appropriate content can bring us a colorful life.

Advertisements:Good or Bad
Nowadays,advertisement is a very common medium in our daily life.We can get it though TV,see it at bus stop and displaying windows of department stores,and listen from radio.Our daily life is filled with various advertisements which can provide us with useful information.In a word,advertisement is playing a very important role in our daily life.
People hold different opinions of advertisement.Some people welcome advertisements because they think advertisements make their life more convenient.When new products come along at the market,people get to know the function of new products through advertisements and evaluate them accordingly.But some people hold negative views:they think many advertisements overstated the merits of products but neglected the defects of them.Besides,when we are watching a very attractive TV program or a basketball game,advertisements always disturb our interests and destroy our good mood.
My point is that we should welcome advertisements because they actually make our daily life more convenient.However,we have to cut their disadvantages to the lowest level while utilizing their advantages.Broadcasting advertisements with appropriate contents on appropriate time and through appropriate medium can make our lifes much more colourful.
我以前一直做英语语篇改错的,