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英语短文改错求助大家火速帮忙,谢谢basketball is popular with young students a

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英语短文改错求助
大家火速帮忙,谢谢
basketball is popular with young students at school, these days we are exciting about the basketball matches between the classes in their grade, we have chosen our plays careful and practised a lot of after school every day, we also had organized our cheer team, prepare dances and slogans to cheer ourselves up, in short, we have done many things for the matches, though we don't have good player and we are not quite skillful, we all believe that we can cooperate well but win , whatever the result it is, the most important thing are that we are working hard and enjoying ourselves, we are looking forward the coming matches
英语短文改错求助大家火速帮忙,谢谢basketball is popular with young students a
Basketball is popular among young students at school.These days we are excited about the basketball matches among classes of the the same grade; we have chosen our players carefully and practiced a lot after school.We also have organized our cheering teem and prepared dances and slogans to cheer for the players.In short,we have done many things for the matches.Even though we don't have good players and we are not very skillful,we all believe that we can cooperate well and win.The most important thing is that we work hard and enjoy ourselves,whatever the result is.We really look forward to the upcoming matches.
主要错误是标点,改用句号和分号的时候用成了逗号,导致意思混乱.
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