神马作文网写了两篇英语周记,想提高英语.写得不好,希望英语好的朋友帮我修改一下
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写了两篇英语周记,想提高英语.写得不好,希望英语好的朋友帮我修改一下
April 5th 2012
It's sunny today.I decide to write dliaries to improve my English grades.I hope I could succeed .
The most wonderful things happened in afternoon.V ,D and I lay down in the grass.sunshine is warm.
That's all,I know I must be make lots of mistakes.But I will be rewrte .
April 13th 2012 Starday
The terrible things in this week.I lost my umbrella .I had 2 umbrellas before on Thursday.One is the yellow,the other is blue.The yellow one was broken on Thursday.So I bought the blue one in school.Because it's rain all day until Friday.I had to stay at school to study.
But the blue one is common in the class.Afternoon,I found my umbrella had lost.
What a pity!I only use it for1 day!
April 5th 2012
It's sunny today.I decide to write dliaries to improve my English grades.I hope I could succeed .
The most wonderful things happened in afternoon.V ,D and I lay down in the grass.sunshine is warm.
That's all,I know I must be make lots of mistakes.But I will be rewrte .
April 13th 2012 Starday
The terrible things in this week.I lost my umbrella .I had 2 umbrellas before on Thursday.One is the yellow,the other is blue.The yellow one was broken on Thursday.So I bought the blue one in school.Because it's rain all day until Friday.I had to stay at school to study.
But the blue one is common in the class.Afternoon,I found my umbrella had lost.
What a pity!I only use it for1 day!
April 5th 2012
It's sunny today.I decide to write dliaries to improve my English .I hope I could succeed someday.
The most wonderful thing happened in afternoon.V ,D and I lay down on the grass and the sunshine was warm.
That's all,I know I must have made lots of mistakes.But I will rewrte as soon as possible.
April 13th 2012 Saturday
The terrible things happened this week.I lost my umbrella .I had 2 umbrellas before Thursday.One is yellow,the other is blue.The yellow one was broken on Thursday.So I bought the blue one in school.Because it's raining all day until Friday.I had to stay at school to study.
But the blue one is common in the class.Afternoon,I found my umbrella had lost.
What a pity!I only have used it for1 day!
语法错误基本上给你改了,但是逻辑有点混乱
It's sunny today.I decide to write dliaries to improve my English .I hope I could succeed someday.
The most wonderful thing happened in afternoon.V ,D and I lay down on the grass and the sunshine was warm.
That's all,I know I must have made lots of mistakes.But I will rewrte as soon as possible.
April 13th 2012 Saturday
The terrible things happened this week.I lost my umbrella .I had 2 umbrellas before Thursday.One is yellow,the other is blue.The yellow one was broken on Thursday.So I bought the blue one in school.Because it's raining all day until Friday.I had to stay at school to study.
But the blue one is common in the class.Afternoon,I found my umbrella had lost.
What a pity!I only have used it for1 day!
语法错误基本上给你改了,但是逻辑有点混乱
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