帮我改一下6级英语作文,只需指出语法错误,重谢!

帮我改一下6级英语作文,只需指出语法错误,重谢!
Composition about U5
——How to Study English
As an international language, the significance of English is emphasized everyday at school. As a sophomore, although I have studied English for over 10 years, yet I’ve not finished English curriculum. But now, I will introduce my may to learning English.
To Chinese students, the worst difficulty of English is writing. So I write the composition as a practice. Writing is the most important skill, except speaking. If you want to enter into some great joint-venture or overseas-funded enterprises, you must write the resume totally in English. Pay attention on the writing, because it indicates your real English level. Second, listen the English includes songs, TVs and movies at least 20 minutes everyday, otherwise you may forget it. After you are accustomed to listening English, you will comprehend the meaning unconsciously. Last but not least, when you are reading some English, please sit at the corner or where there is nobody and speak it loudly, that helps you memorize the context deeply.
In short, when you are immersed in the English ocean, it is just a piece of cake. That’s my experience of English study, may it help you.
Composition about U6
——EQ and IQ Test
Many parents like to test their children’s IQ or EQ even the kids are quite little. Some psychologists point out that it is no good for testing the little children’s EQ or IQ, because it just hurt some infancy heart with the low marks.
I agree with the psychologists. I think the EQ or IQ test is no use and sometimes unfaithful. Some test indicates the famous genius’ IQ is over 200 or even more, that’s deceptions. First, what is the definition of the IQ scores? How much is the full marks? How they calculate the marks? Besides, if the IQ designer’s IQ is lower than the talents like me, how the designer acquires the intelligence of the talents on earth? I think if they know, they must be the smartest guy in the world.
According to some psychologist authority, those who get the high marks in the EQ or IQ tests just show that they are good at doing these questionnaires. In a word, don’t care about it, even if your IQ or EQ mark is low.
对于会英语的高手来说,这两篇不算长吧.要是我们外教只要5分钟就看完,然后指出一大堆错误,可惜,没机会了.

How to Study English
As an international language,the significance of English is (加上being好一点) emphasized everyday at school.As a sophomore,although I have studied English for over 10 years,yet I’ve not finished （应该有个定定冠词the或者用my）English curriculum.But now,I will introduce my may(应该是way吧） to（改成of） learning English（最好再加个to you）.
To Chinese students,the worst difficulty of English is writing.So I write the composition as a practice.Writing is the most important skill,except（改成as well as） speaking.If you want to enter（改成step或去掉into） into some great joint-venture or overseas-funded（foreign就OK了） enterprises,you must write the resume totally in English.Pay attention on（应该是to） the writing,because it indicates your real English level.Second,listen （加上一个to）the（去掉the） English includes（改为including） songs,TVs and movies （加上一个for表示持续时间）at least 20 minutes everyday,otherwise you may forget it.After you are accustomed to listening （加上to）English,you will comprehend the meaning unconsciously.Last but not least,when you are reading some English,please sit at the（改为a） corner or where there is nobody and speak it loudly,that helps you memorize the context deeply.
In short（这里in short是对的,别听楼上乱说）,when you are immersed in the English ocean,it is just a piece of cake.That’s my experience of English study,may it help you.
EQ and IQ Test
Many parents like to test their children’s IQ or EQ even the kids are quite little（六级水平还用这个词啊,改为young）.Some psychologists point out that it is no good for testing（改为to test或者for去掉） the little children’s EQ or IQ,because it just hurt（单三人称hurts） some infancy（改为younng） heart with the（去掉the） low marks.
I agree with the psychologists.I think the EQ or IQ test is no use and sometimes unfaithful.Some test indicates the famous genius’ IQ is over 200 or even more,that’s（those are） deceptions.First,what is the definition of the IQ scores?How much is the full marks?How they calculate the marks?Besides,if the IQ designer’s IQ is lower than the talents like me（牛人!）,how the designer acquires the intelligence of the talents on earth?I think if they know,they must be the smartest guy in the world.
According to some psychologist authority,those who get the high marks in the EQ or IQ tests just show that they are good at doing these questionnaires.In a word,don’t care about it,even if your IQ or EQ mark is low.