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Taking a pet from Animal Rescue Center has some advantages.First of all,a child feels well about saving an unwanted animal and gives it whole new life.Second ,having a pet also provides an opportunity for children's growth because of a child had to feed,clean up,and exercise the pet.What's more,you only pay a few dollars for a pet there while at pet store you may spend hundred of dollars.Another advantage is what pets like dogs and cats can bring lots of happiness for a family.We can be excellent company for a person who live alone or has lost a loved one.So please take a pet home,
Taking a pet from Animal Rescue Center has some advantages.First of all,a child feels well about saving an unwanted animal and gives it whole new life.Second ,having a pet also provides an opportunity for children's growth because of a child had to feed,clean up,and exercise the pet.What's more,you only pay a few dollars for a pet there while at pet store you may spend hundred of dollars.Another advantage is what pets like dogs and cats can bring lots of happiness for a family.We can be excellent company for a person who live alone or has lost a loved one.So please take a pet home,
Taking 后面加上away 表示‘带走’, gives ---改成giving 和saving 并列做介宾；
because of去掉of,因为because of后面不能接句子,只能接名词和名词短语；
a child had to feed,把had 改成has,因为全文用的都是现在时；
at pet store在at后面加a,因为store是可数名词；hundred 要加上s,数目不确定时用hundreds of;
Another advantage is what把what 改成that; live 要加s,第三人称单数；
because of去掉of,因为because of后面不能接句子,只能接名词和名词短语；
a child had to feed,把had 改成has,因为全文用的都是现在时；
at pet store在at后面加a,因为store是可数名词；hundred 要加上s,数目不确定时用hundreds of;
Another advantage is what把what 改成that; live 要加s,第三人称单数；