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英语.帮我看一下有没有错
I think we can make a realalistic goal,then stick to it .In our spare time,we can participate in various student union to improve our talent.In order to increace our society experience,we can take part in some society activity.
I think we can make a realalistic goal,then stick to it .In our spare time,we can participate in various student union to improve our talent.In order to increace our society experience,we can take part in some society activity.
定目标是set a goal不是make
then建议用and
union-> unions
talent不合理.talent指才能时一般指“天生”的才能,这里应该是要表达“能力”吧,直接用ability具体一点是团队协作能力之类的.
丰富社会阅历用enrich,increase用在实际数字,数量等等的增长上,比如人口增长了多少之类才用.社会阅历social experience.
社交活动social activities.
then建议用and
union-> unions
talent不合理.talent指才能时一般指“天生”的才能,这里应该是要表达“能力”吧,直接用ability具体一点是团队协作能力之类的.
丰富社会阅历用enrich,increase用在实际数字,数量等等的增长上,比如人口增长了多少之类才用.社会阅历social experience.
社交活动social activities.