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请问这篇短文能得几分?
Free admission to museums
越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么?
也会带来一些问题
你的看法
【答】
nowadays,some museum is opened（错） without ticket,i argue the reason of it is that the museum,having faced more challenge,have to be opened（adj,同上） by such method.
however,which may bring some trouble to the museum,in the first place,which will attract person more and more,making the museum a bad situation,other a trouble is that will cause a bad order in the museum.
in my view,the museum should make a rule for visit,and show it on the obvious place,and increase staff,in order that the museum can contantly（拼错,掉了个s）keep a good mood,and which is helpful to attract some people more and more without arising the trouble.
书写有点乱.
PS：以上是我自己写完找出来的错误,可能没找全.
【评分标准】
满分30.
28分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好.基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.
22分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误.（单复数,冠词,拼写,大小写）
16分 —— 基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.（时态混乱,句子成分搭配不当）
Free admission to museums
越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么?
也会带来一些问题
你的看法
【答】
nowadays,some museum is opened（错） without ticket,i argue the reason of it is that the museum,having faced more challenge,have to be opened（adj,同上） by such method.
however,which may bring some trouble to the museum,in the first place,which will attract person more and more,making the museum a bad situation,other a trouble is that will cause a bad order in the museum.
in my view,the museum should make a rule for visit,and show it on the obvious place,and increase staff,in order that the museum can contantly（拼错,掉了个s）keep a good mood,and which is helpful to attract some people more and more without arising the trouble.
书写有点乱.
PS：以上是我自己写完找出来的错误,可能没找全.
【评分标准】
满分30.
28分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好.基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.
22分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误.（单复数,冠词,拼写,大小写）
16分 —— 基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.（时态混乱,句子成分搭配不当）
22到24之间 写得还可以 就是有点乱 你要把相同的观点放在一起,看起来结构整齐