帮忙找出有没有语法错误,有没有偏题?还可不可以再加一些句子填充内容?
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帮忙找出有没有语法错误,有没有偏题?还可不可以再加一些句子填充内容?
As far as I know,many teenagers don't know how to study.They can't remember things well.Some of them always forget something important.For example,they can't remember the English words very well.But English is one of the most important subjects that we learn.So they have to spend more time on English.After we compared the bad students with the good students,we knew that there aren't many differences between the excellent students and the worst students.As you can see,modern students need a good way to help them study.The right way can help students to study harder.It's the most important thing to find their own ways to study.Most of students think they don't have any free time to study.So they think it is not useful to find their own ways to study.But it seems that they always have nothing to do after class.Why not do some reading or remember some English words?I believe that might help you a lot.After class,you can also ask your classmate about some geographical problems.Although it may be boring,it will help you to pass the examination.I think it is not hard to study well.You should catch the time and have a brave heart.Good habbits can make good study environment.Good study environment will help you to achieve your dream.Nothing is impossible,if you want to put your heart into it.It's a long trip.When you are on the road,you have to run fast and challenge yourself.That's easy to talk about but it's difficult to do.You should act now and try your best to realize your dream
As far as I know,many teenagers don't know how to study.They can't remember things well.Some of them always forget something important.For example,they can't remember the English words very well.But English is one of the most important subjects that we learn.So they have to spend more time on English.After we compared the bad students with the good students,we knew that there aren't many differences between the excellent students and the worst students.As you can see,modern students need a good way to help them study.The right way can help students to study harder.It's the most important thing to find their own ways to study.Most of students think they don't have any free time to study.So they think it is not useful to find their own ways to study.But it seems that they always have nothing to do after class.Why not do some reading or remember some English words?I believe that might help you a lot.After class,you can also ask your classmate about some geographical problems.Although it may be boring,it will help you to pass the examination.I think it is not hard to study well.You should catch the time and have a brave heart.Good habbits can make good study environment.Good study environment will help you to achieve your dream.Nothing is impossible,if you want to put your heart into it.It's a long trip.When you are on the road,you have to run fast and challenge yourself.That's easy to talk about but it's difficult to do.You should act now and try your best to realize your dream
第五行excellent改成best 才能与worst对应 倒数第五行examination直接写exam就行啦 还有倒数第六行为什么出现geographical?全文不是讲关于英语的吗? 文章总体不错 没必要填充句子啦
再问: 我们老师说过,像excellent,perfect这种词本身就有最高级的意味,所以没有最高级。。。
这篇文章我是想写How to study的,写完后感觉有几个地方与题目好像搭不到边。。。所以问一问
再答: 哦哦,你给我讲啦一个知识耶!谢谢 文章那就可以啦 求采纳!~
再问: 我们老师说过,像excellent,perfect这种词本身就有最高级的意味,所以没有最高级。。。
这篇文章我是想写How to study的,写完后感觉有几个地方与题目好像搭不到边。。。所以问一问
再答: 哦哦,你给我讲啦一个知识耶!谢谢 文章那就可以啦 求采纳!~