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原文是这样的,Short after the new school year began,an exciting party held in our school.the party was so intersting and instructive that all the teachers and students enjoyed very much.At the party some students perform many rich and colourful programmer,such as songs,dances,plays and so on.They sang in highly praise of our sociallist motherland.Everbody who was present was struck by wonderfur programmes.The party was lasted nearly three hours,and when at last come to an end,the audience stood up,cheered and clapping for a long time.What a successful party we had had that day!一共有九个需要改的…不包括大小写和笔误…请大家帮帮忙……
原文是这样的,Short after the new school year began,an exciting party held in our school.the party was so intersting and instructive that all the teachers and students enjoyed very much.At the party some students perform many rich and colourful programmer,such as songs,dances,plays and so on.They sang in highly praise of our sociallist motherland.Everbody who was present was struck by wonderfur programmes.The party was lasted nearly three hours,and when at last come to an end,the audience stood up,cheered and clapping for a long time.What a successful party we had had that day!一共有九个需要改的…不包括大小写和笔误…请大家帮帮忙……
Short after the new school year began,an exciting party（was） held in our school.the party was so intersting and instructive that all the teachers and students enjoyed very much.At the party some stu...