英语翻译以下是我准备让我爸爸签字的担保书,英语方面请英语高手再帮我修改一下吧,另外我不知道是否最后一段要解释我户口不在父

英语翻译
以下是我准备让我爸爸签字的担保书,英语方面请英语高手再帮我修改一下吧,另外我不知道是否最后一段要解释我户口不在父母这边的原因,因为父母的房产证本来就没我名字,我户口又在姨妈那里,我怕多解释又不好,不解释签证官又怀疑我,麻烦呀,
Letter of Supporting 12/02/2011
To:Canada Embassy
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am the applicant Ji Jing's father and guarantor for her visiting in Canada,Ji Xinghua.March 14th to March 27th 2011,my daughter Ji Jing decided to go to Canada for visiting his boyfriend,Austin Wang,and Austin Wang’s family whom Ji Jing’s Mother and I have met when they were in Shanghai.Considering that my daughter has a saving of 60,000RMB,and Austin Wang will also take charge of all her expenses in Canada,Ji Jing’s monter and I are willing to provide our Shanghai Certificate of Real Estate Ownership to support my daughter.I guarantee that my daughter Ji Jing will have no economic difficulties in Canada and obey the laws and regulations.I am willing to bear all the responsibility if any problems happen.
Additionally,I want to explain the reason why my daughter Ji Jing’s name is not on our Household Register.We transferred her to Ji Jing’s aunt’s (my wife’s elder sister’s) Household Register in 1998 for better education in a good primary school in Zhabei District.
Please give kind consideration to my daughter Ji Jing's visa application.Thanks a lot!
I hereby to guarantee.
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担保信 2011年02月12日
致：加拿大大使馆：
尊敬的签证官先生/女士：
我是申请人季菁的父亲兼其在加拿大访问旅游的担保人,季兴华.我女儿季菁计划于2011年3月14日至2011年3月27日,赴加拿大多伦多拜访男友Austin Wang和其父母及妹妹.考虑到我女儿原有积蓄6万元人名币,并且邀请人Austin Wang将支付我女儿所有在加拿大的费用,我和女儿的母亲非常愿意提供我们的上海市房地产权证作为她赴加拿大的担保.我保证我女儿季菁在加拿大期间不会在经济方面遇到任何困难,并保证她不会触犯任何法律,若有任何问题,我愿意承担一切责任!
此外,为了女儿能在闸北区得到更好的小学教育,我们在1998年将女儿季菁的户口转入她的姨妈（我妻子的姐姐）家庭的户口.
希望签证官对我女儿季菁的签证申请给予善意的考虑,
特此担保!
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有些地方感觉不符合老外说话习惯,另外有需要加的信息可以自己再改.
My name is Jixing Hua,who is the applicant Ji Jing's father.I am willing to be her guarantor for her visiting in Canada.My daughter plans to visit her boyfriend,Austin Wang,and his family from March 14th to March 27th this year.
Considering that my daughter has 60,000 RMB bank deposit,and Austin Wang,her boyfriend as well as inviter,is willing to cover all my daughter's expenses in Canada,Ji Jing's mother and I are willing to use our real property ownership certificate as my daughter's guarantee.I certify that my daughter Ji Jing will not have any economic hardship and she will categorically abide by the law in Canada.I am willing to accept all the responsibility and consequence of my daughter's behavior.
In addition,my daughter's registered residence was changed to Zhabei District,in which Ji Jing's aunt lives,for educational propose in 1998.We are looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours
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特此证明,善意考虑这些客套的应该不需要,老外他们风格不同.我一字一句自己翻译的,你参考下吧.