神马作文网英语翻译我现在急需有人帮我修改一下这篇英语小短文.这是我刚刚写的,毛病肯定很多的,We have many subjec
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英语翻译
我现在急需有人帮我修改一下这篇英语小短文.
这是我刚刚写的,毛病肯定很多的,
We have many subject in our class.We have English,math,Chinese and more.I am a student in Grade seven.I like English very much.Because it's interesting.
In our class,many girls like music class,because music is relaxing.And they can sing pop song and dance.But my friend Mary doesn't like it.She thinks it's boring.And I don't like music,either.
Many boys like P.E.and computer.On P.E.class,they can play the basketball and ping-pong.It's really exciting!On computer class,boys can play the computer game.It's just so happy!
对了，突然想到一个问题
我现在急需有人帮我修改一下这篇英语小短文.
这是我刚刚写的,毛病肯定很多的,
We have many subject in our class.We have English,math,Chinese and more.I am a student in Grade seven.I like English very much.Because it's interesting.
In our class,many girls like music class,because music is relaxing.And they can sing pop song and dance.But my friend Mary doesn't like it.She thinks it's boring.And I don't like music,either.
Many boys like P.E.and computer.On P.E.class,they can play the basketball and ping-pong.It's really exciting!On computer class,boys can play the computer game.It's just so happy!
对了，突然想到一个问题
subject改为subjects,
and more 改为and so on
song改为songs
On P.E.class 和On computer class中,把On改为In
play the basketball 去掉the
play the computer game中改为 games
这是我找到的语法错误,语言方面你自己改一下.
and more 改为and so on
song改为songs
On P.E.class 和On computer class中,把On改为In
play the basketball 去掉the
play the computer game中改为 games
这是我找到的语法错误,语言方面你自己改一下.
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