神马作文网英语作文评析,正文如下（七年级水平）
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英语作文评析,正文如下（七年级水平）
There is a big wind blows in a spring night,at a small city.At 2 o’clock,Xiao Hong suddenly thinks the classroom’s windows isn’t turn off.She wears her dress quickly and runs into her school.She goes to her classroom and turns off the windows.She is really tired but she is very happy.
There is a big wind blows in a spring night,at a small city.At 2 o’clock,Xiao Hong suddenly thinks the classroom’s windows isn’t turn off.She wears her dress quickly and runs into her school.She goes to her classroom and turns off the windows.She is really tired but she is very happy.
第二句中的时间最好不要,用在这里有点多余,而且,这个时间用在这里,一般后面是要接现在进行时的.要是要表现时间的话,最好不用具体的时间点,可以用其他的来表示.如果要用,因该是凌晨吧,就要加上in the morning
第二句中,turn off一般表示关电器之类,关窗户用close windows,在这里用形容词形式表示状态,可以用the classroom’s windows aren't closed（教室的窗户没有关）,也可以用the classroom’s windows are open（教室的窗户开着）
如果有第一句话,就表示讲故事,建议最好用过去式,
第二句中,turn off一般表示关电器之类,关窗户用close windows,在这里用形容词形式表示状态,可以用the classroom’s windows aren't closed（教室的窗户没有关）,也可以用the classroom’s windows are open（教室的窗户开着）
如果有第一句话,就表示讲故事,建议最好用过去式,