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The introduce of world brands
Our school advocates education for all-round development,and I think know something about world brands is good for us.
I choose ten brands which I like best from so many brands.
1.LV
The top of the articles of luxury.
Louis Vuitton,a trunk-maker in Paris since 1854,became a legend in the art of travel by creating luggage,bags and accessories as innovative as they were elegant and practical.A century and a half later,the legend lives on.
Always leading the avant-garde of fashion without compromising traditional craftsmanship,Louis Vuitton is now active in other creative spheres:ready-to-wear,shoes,watches and jewelry.
2.GUCCI
The Gucci trademark regards two kinds of green red green,blue red blue color combinations as principle,distinct natural leather and dye leather product.At the same time,the company returns to write female GG marking to make a decoration bottom line by the Gucci name of the founder Guccio head,calling high-quality cotton yarn in the meantime GG cloth,used for making hand bag,decoration and clothes.
Aroud our school we can see many girls have a GUCCI bag,in fact,it’s the counterfeit.
3.ARMANI
The age tended to confuse more in the sexual sex,the clothing isn't absolute distinction between sexes any more,the GIORGIO ARMANI is to break sun just and the boundary,guided one of the designer whom the ladys' wear headed into neutral style.The ARMANI majors in science course in the school,the university reads aloud a medicine department,holding the post of assistant to cure an officer while undergoing military service,the analytical training of reasonableness attitude,and balanced concept in the world is the standard that he designs clothing.Up to now,the business of the ARMANI company has already spread over more than 100 nations.
4.VERCASE
The Italian clothing brand VERCASE represents a brand household,a vogue empire.Its design style is fresh and clear,is the symbol of special pleasant impression very strong vanguard art.
The snake delivers witch and general traditional pattern in the city wall to have become VERSACE brand logo.
5.Dior
The Christian Dior was born in the Normandy in 1905 France,"Dior" was the combination of"God" and"gold" in French,the gold color also became Dior brand the most familiar representative's color afterwards.
In 1947,Paris that is after World War II is in the reconstruction the central process of the world fashionable dresses,Dior's making can't obliterate of contribution;In 2005,the Christian Dior is born 100 today anniversaries,the Dior brings the new experience that people live and wear continuously
6.CHANEL
Initiate a person Gabrielle Chanel in 1913's foundation CHANEL in Paris in France,the CHANEL product category is numerous,there is clothing,jewelry decoration,accessories,cosmetics,perfume,each time a kind of product all known far and near,especially her perfume and the fashionable dresses.
CHANEL is 1 has more than 80 years experience of well-known brand,the CHANEL fashionable dresses has elegant,simple and direct and elegant style forever,she is good at breaking a tradition,early 40's push the ladys' wear of"five the flowers bind greatly" successfully to simple,comfort,this is perhaps the earliest modern sporty elegance.
7.A&F
The Abercrombie & Fitch is to bring about global vogue tornado of American recreation first is popular,is a young man nowadays most the brand of favor is an American university student most IN one of the brand is also native hundred years old store brand which is established in American New York in 1892.
The introduce of world brands
Our school advocates education for all-round development,and I think know something about world brands is good for us.
I choose ten brands which I like best from so many brands.
1.LV
The top of the articles of luxury.
Louis Vuitton,a trunk-maker in Paris since 1854,became a legend in the art of travel by creating luggage,bags and accessories as innovative as they were elegant and practical.A century and a half later,the legend lives on.
Always leading the avant-garde of fashion without compromising traditional craftsmanship,Louis Vuitton is now active in other creative spheres:ready-to-wear,shoes,watches and jewelry.
2.GUCCI
The Gucci trademark regards two kinds of green red green,blue red blue color combinations as principle,distinct natural leather and dye leather product.At the same time,the company returns to write female GG marking to make a decoration bottom line by the Gucci name of the founder Guccio head,calling high-quality cotton yarn in the meantime GG cloth,used for making hand bag,decoration and clothes.
Aroud our school we can see many girls have a GUCCI bag,in fact,it’s the counterfeit.
3.ARMANI
The age tended to confuse more in the sexual sex,the clothing isn't absolute distinction between sexes any more,the GIORGIO ARMANI is to break sun just and the boundary,guided one of the designer whom the ladys' wear headed into neutral style.The ARMANI majors in science course in the school,the university reads aloud a medicine department,holding the post of assistant to cure an officer while undergoing military service,the analytical training of reasonableness attitude,and balanced concept in the world is the standard that he designs clothing.Up to now,the business of the ARMANI company has already spread over more than 100 nations.
4.VERCASE
The Italian clothing brand VERCASE represents a brand household,a vogue empire.Its design style is fresh and clear,is the symbol of special pleasant impression very strong vanguard art.
The snake delivers witch and general traditional pattern in the city wall to have become VERSACE brand logo.
5.Dior
The Christian Dior was born in the Normandy in 1905 France,"Dior" was the combination of"God" and"gold" in French,the gold color also became Dior brand the most familiar representative's color afterwards.
In 1947,Paris that is after World War II is in the reconstruction the central process of the world fashionable dresses,Dior's making can't obliterate of contribution;In 2005,the Christian Dior is born 100 today anniversaries,the Dior brings the new experience that people live and wear continuously
6.CHANEL
Initiate a person Gabrielle Chanel in 1913's foundation CHANEL in Paris in France,the CHANEL product category is numerous,there is clothing,jewelry decoration,accessories,cosmetics,perfume,each time a kind of product all known far and near,especially her perfume and the fashionable dresses.
CHANEL is 1 has more than 80 years experience of well-known brand,the CHANEL fashionable dresses has elegant,simple and direct and elegant style forever,she is good at breaking a tradition,early 40's push the ladys' wear of"five the flowers bind greatly" successfully to simple,comfort,this is perhaps the earliest modern sporty elegance.
7.A&F
The Abercrombie & Fitch is to bring about global vogue tornado of American recreation first is popular,is a young man nowadays most the brand of favor is an American university student most IN one of the brand is also native hundred years old store brand which is established in American New York in 1892.
The introduce of world brands
Our school advocates education for all-round development,and I think(改为want to) know something about （加which）world brands（去掉s） is good for us.
I choose（改为have chosen） ten brands which I like best from so many brands.
1.LV
The top of the articles of luxury.
Louis Vuitton,a trunk-maker in Paris since 1854,became a legend in the art of travel by creating luggage,bags and accessories as innovative as they were elegant and practical.A century and a half later,the legend lives on.
Always leading the avant-garde of fashion without compromising traditional craftsmanship,Louis Vuitton is now active in other creative spheres:ready-to-wear,shoes,watches and jewelry.
2.GUCCI
The Gucci trademark regards two kinds of green red green,blue red blue color combinations as principle,distinct natural leather and dye leather product.At the same time,the company returns to write female GG marking to make a decoration bottom line by the Gucci name of the founder Guccio head,calling high-quality cotton yarn in the meantime GG cloth,used for making hand bag,decoration and clothes.
Aroud our school we can see many girls have a GUCCI bag,in fact,it’s the counterfeit.
3.ARMANI
The age tended to confuse more in the sexual sex,the clothing isn't absolute distinction between sexes any more,the GIORGIO ARMANI is to break sun just and the boundary,guided one of the designer whom the ladys' wear headed into neutral style.The ARMANI majors in science course in the school,the university reads aloud a medicine department,holding the post of assistant to cure an officer while undergoing military service,the analytical training of reasonableness attitude,and balanced concept in the world is the standard that he designs clothing.Up to now,the business of the ARMANI company has already spread over more than 100 nations.
4.VERCASE
The Italian clothing brand VERCASE represents a brand household,a vogue empire.Its design style is fresh and clear,is the symbol of special pleasant impression very strong vanguard art.
The snake delivers witch and general traditional pattern in the city wall to have become VERSACE brand logo.
5.Dior
The Christian Dior was born in the Normandy in 1905 France,"Dior" was the combination of"God" and"gold" in French,the gold color also became Dior brand the most familiar representative's color afterwards.
In 1947,Paris that is after World War II is in the reconstruction the central process of the world fashionable dresses,Dior's making can't obliterate of contribution;In 2005,the Christian Dior is born 100 today anniversaries,the Dior brings the new experience that people live and wear continuously
问题补充：6.CHANEL
Initiate a person Gabrielle Chanel in 1913's foundation CHANEL in Paris in France,the CHANEL product category is numerous,there is clothing,jewelry decoration,accessories,cosmetics,perfume,each time a kind of product all known far and near,especially her perfume and the fashionable dresses.
CHANEL is 1 has more than 80 years experience of well-known brand,the CHANEL fashionable dresses has elegant,simple and direct and elegant style forever,she is good at breaking a tradition,early 40's push the ladys' wear of"five the flowers bind greatly" successfully to simple,comfort,this is perhaps the earliest modern sporty elegance.
7.A&F
The Abercrombie & Fitch is to bring about global vogue tornado of American recreation first is popular,is a young man nowadays most the brand of favor is an American university student most IN one of the brand is also native hundred years old store brand which is established in American New York in 1892.
Our school advocates education for all-round development,and I think(改为want to) know something about （加which）world brands（去掉s） is good for us.
I choose（改为have chosen） ten brands which I like best from so many brands.
1.LV
The top of the articles of luxury.
Louis Vuitton,a trunk-maker in Paris since 1854,became a legend in the art of travel by creating luggage,bags and accessories as innovative as they were elegant and practical.A century and a half later,the legend lives on.
Always leading the avant-garde of fashion without compromising traditional craftsmanship,Louis Vuitton is now active in other creative spheres:ready-to-wear,shoes,watches and jewelry.
2.GUCCI
The Gucci trademark regards two kinds of green red green,blue red blue color combinations as principle,distinct natural leather and dye leather product.At the same time,the company returns to write female GG marking to make a decoration bottom line by the Gucci name of the founder Guccio head,calling high-quality cotton yarn in the meantime GG cloth,used for making hand bag,decoration and clothes.
Aroud our school we can see many girls have a GUCCI bag,in fact,it’s the counterfeit.
3.ARMANI
The age tended to confuse more in the sexual sex,the clothing isn't absolute distinction between sexes any more,the GIORGIO ARMANI is to break sun just and the boundary,guided one of the designer whom the ladys' wear headed into neutral style.The ARMANI majors in science course in the school,the university reads aloud a medicine department,holding the post of assistant to cure an officer while undergoing military service,the analytical training of reasonableness attitude,and balanced concept in the world is the standard that he designs clothing.Up to now,the business of the ARMANI company has already spread over more than 100 nations.
4.VERCASE
The Italian clothing brand VERCASE represents a brand household,a vogue empire.Its design style is fresh and clear,is the symbol of special pleasant impression very strong vanguard art.
The snake delivers witch and general traditional pattern in the city wall to have become VERSACE brand logo.
5.Dior
The Christian Dior was born in the Normandy in 1905 France,"Dior" was the combination of"God" and"gold" in French,the gold color also became Dior brand the most familiar representative's color afterwards.
In 1947,Paris that is after World War II is in the reconstruction the central process of the world fashionable dresses,Dior's making can't obliterate of contribution;In 2005,the Christian Dior is born 100 today anniversaries,the Dior brings the new experience that people live and wear continuously
问题补充：6.CHANEL
Initiate a person Gabrielle Chanel in 1913's foundation CHANEL in Paris in France,the CHANEL product category is numerous,there is clothing,jewelry decoration,accessories,cosmetics,perfume,each time a kind of product all known far and near,especially her perfume and the fashionable dresses.
CHANEL is 1 has more than 80 years experience of well-known brand,the CHANEL fashionable dresses has elegant,simple and direct and elegant style forever,she is good at breaking a tradition,early 40's push the ladys' wear of"five the flowers bind greatly" successfully to simple,comfort,this is perhaps the earliest modern sporty elegance.
7.A&F
The Abercrombie & Fitch is to bring about global vogue tornado of American recreation first is popular,is a young man nowadays most the brand of favor is an American university student most IN one of the brand is also native hundred years old store brand which is established in American New York in 1892.