神马作文网能帮我改改英语作文吗?
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能帮我改改英语作文吗?
{1.The student uniton make a activity,which named is "Disagree with waste,Agree with no waste ",more than 900 people join in the activity .2.The activity at enter of school canteen,at monday 4PM on march 4,2013.3.Using the board to show the behavior of waste in our school,and play the video to know the behavior.4.The behavior show that ten millon people die of starvation in the world every years.} 就是这篇作文了,时态错误就不管了,主要是“主谓宾”和“句子结构完不完整”这两个问题!我把序号标上了,这是五句话作文,这里是其中四句.
{1.The student uniton make a activity,which named is "Disagree with waste,Agree with no waste ",more than 900 people join in the activity .2.The activity at enter of school canteen,at monday 4PM on march 4,2013.3.Using the board to show the behavior of waste in our school,and play the video to know the behavior.4.The behavior show that ten millon people die of starvation in the world every years.} 就是这篇作文了,时态错误就不管了,主要是“主谓宾”和“句子结构完不完整”这两个问题!我把序号标上了,这是五句话作文,这里是其中四句.
最后一句year用单数,第一句不是make a activity,不能这么搭配,第三句主语去哪了?把逗号去掉,用and连接即可.
再问： 先谢谢亲那么快回答我问题，有几个我还是不懂啊“： 1.我第一句是说”学生会组织了个活动“,"make a activity"是错的，请问我要怎么改啊？ 2第三句主语是这个活动，因为我英语基础很不好，我模糊感到放在开头的动词要用ing形式，所以就这样了。请问我是不是改成”The activity using ……“这样就可以啦？？ 3………^^我这篇作文毛病只有这几个吗？真的话好开森~
再答： 组织活动应该是organize activities吧~第三句前半句可以，后边不行，后边半句主语是人吧？可以说and we play the video to make the behavior understood by others...
再问： 先谢谢亲那么快回答我问题，有几个我还是不懂啊“： 1.我第一句是说”学生会组织了个活动“,"make a activity"是错的，请问我要怎么改啊？ 2第三句主语是这个活动，因为我英语基础很不好，我模糊感到放在开头的动词要用ing形式，所以就这样了。请问我是不是改成”The activity using ……“这样就可以啦？？ 3………^^我这篇作文毛病只有这几个吗？真的话好开森~
再答： 组织活动应该是organize activities吧~第三句前半句可以，后边不行，后边半句主语是人吧？可以说and we play the video to make the behavior understood by others...