请英语高手教我写一下这篇作文：My summer holiday

请英语高手教我写一下这篇作文：My summer holiday
呵呵谢谢了.

你也不说你是哪年级,也不给分.给俩简单一复杂的,爱抄哪抄哪：
My summer vacation of this year was very enjoyable.I went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays.It is very beautiful there.There are green plants,clear rivers,lovely animals and kind people.I spent two weeks helping my grandfather do some farm work there.I wrote down what happened in my diary every day.
Besides that,I helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons.I helped them read English and improve their spoken English.Their parents thanked me for this.
今年的暑假生活非常愉快.我去农村过暑假.那儿非常美丽,有绿色的植物,清澈的小河,可爱的动物和善良的人们.在那里的两周中我帮爷爷干了些农活.每天我在日记中记下所发生的事情.
除了这些,我还帮助邻居家的孩子做功课.我帮他们读英语,使他们的口语有所提高.他们的父母为此很感激我.
I went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays this year.I liked green plants,clear rivers and lovely amimals there.I breathed the fresh air on the mountain and sometimes I went swimming in the river.I kept a diary every day.
I liked not only the scene of the countryside,but also the people there.I helped them to do farm work.I also helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons.The children were interested in English.They were good at reading and writing,but did not do well in listening and speaking.I helped them improve their listening and speaking.Their parents thought highly of me.I realized that knowledge is greatly needed in the countryside.
今年我去农村过暑假.我喜欢那儿绿油油的植物,清澈的小河和可爱的动物.我在山上呼吸新鲜的空气,有时在河里游泳.我每天记日记.
我不仅喜欢那里的景色,而且喜欢那里的人.我帮他们干农活,帮助邻家的孩子复习功课.孩子们对英语很感兴趣,他们在读、写方面很好,但听、说不好.我帮助他们提高听、说能力,他们的父母高度赞扬了我.我意识到农村确实需要知识.
My Summer Holiday Life
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These days I felt so free.I can do the things that I like.I can get up till the sun has already rose very high in the sky and don’t need to worry about being late for school.I can go shopping day after day unless I am tired.I can go to the places where I want to go.I can stay at home and surf the internet day
after day.I can talk with my friends online and play computer games.I can enjoy myself to the full. Because I know clearly that after the summer holiday my busy school life will begin.I will use this summer holiday to do the things that I can not do during the school life.
How time flies!I felt I had done nothing but the day for school is nearer and nearer.Now I found playing without definite goals was so boring.I want to go to school now and I want to read books.I also miss my classmates and my teachers.Now I felt the blankness of my life.I thought the restriction sometimes would become a good thing.Freedom is a relative conception and there is no absolute freedom.
Nowadays I will go out to teach a junior student everyday to earn some money
,and then I will translate some short articles for improving my English,except
for that I will read all the books that I like.These days I always went to a book store,where I can borrow some books to read.A book one day only costs 0.2
Yuan.There are many famous books there and I am very fond of that bookstore now
.Three days before I had finished the book named “The Mouse Loves the Rice” written by Yang Chengang who is a very popular singer on internet now.The story
is not so interesting and is a sand story.It describes two lovers who meet and
fall in love with each other by chatting on internet depart in the end.
Today I am reading another book “The Stories Happened in Beijing” (Its Chinese name is “Jing Hua Yan Yun”,I don’t know the appropriate translation) written by Lin Yutang.
This book is just like “红楼梦”,I has just read a little and this book needs
to be read word by word for it’s such a great book.After I finished it I hope
I can share my thoughts and view with my friends.Because discussing with my friends about a book will make me understand the book much more profound and penetrating.I like discuss with all my friends and I’d like to hear various views that were different from mine.
In less than three weeks I will begin my school life and now I am expecting
it very much.I will begin my new life and I am determined to study the knowledge carefully with my heart.Because now I have already found the fun in study and
I know I must learn something to enrich my life.
Tomorrow is another day!