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帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有错误(面试用)因为不是什么大场合所以简单点就好 我是一学生

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帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有错误(面试用)因为不是什么大场合所以简单点就好 我是一学生
hello everyone
My name is Tim.I'm a 19 years old boy.I live in the business city of SiChuan.I'm an active,lovely boy.In the school my favorite subject is math.I also like sports very much.Such as,running,table tennis and so on.But my favorite sport is basketball .I always play basketball with my classmates .I believe I can enter this school.Because I have the confidence.Waiting to greet me.I will become a member of this school in the near future This is me .A Confident and sunny boy.
My controduce is over
thank you
帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有错误(面试用)因为不是什么大场合所以简单点就好 我是一学生
四川-Sichuan
要不In the school, my favorite subject is math
要不My favorite subject is math In the school
But my favorite sport is basketball改为But I like sports is playing basketball
My controduce is over对齐
同意楼上,简单句太多,不知道你是不是真19了.如果是请用一些复杂句