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请评价下列句子（有错误的地方请加以改正）： 1.When the students feel tired, they canput a button in a small box, then they can listen to their favourite singer's songs. 2.When the class is over, robots will give you some food to eat, of course , if you are hungry now. 3.There are all kinfs of lessons in the computer. 4.Students only need to take their pens and paper. 5.Students can choose their favourite subjects to learn. 6.There will be a restaurant in the playground , when we feel thirty or hungry , we can go there and have a drink or have a big meal. 7.Every one will have a laptop on their desk, the students can carry them everywhere ,because the laptop will be very light.
解题思路： 能够运用所学知识正确表达自己的意思，可以用这些句子组成一篇精彩的英语作文。能够从各个方面来设想未来，想像力非常丰富。
解题过程：
请评价下列句子（有错误的地方请加以改正）：
1.When the students feel tired, they can put （改为press,按） a button in a small box, then they can listen to their favourite singer's songs.
2.When the class is over, robots will give you some food to eat, of course , if you are hungry now.（if you are hungry）
3.There are all kinfs (kinds) of lessons(subjects,课程) in （on） the computer.
4.Students only need to take their pens and paper.
5.Students can choose their favourite subjects to learn.
6.There will be a restaurant in (on) the playground , when we feel thirty or hungry , we can go there and have a drink or have a big meal.(something to eat)
7.Everyone will have a laptop on their desk, the students can carry them everywhere ,because the laptop will be very light.
这些句子都能够正确运用will 引导的将来时，用词准确，表达清楚，意思明确。并且想像丰富，生动合理。能够用所学的新时态写出这些句子，可见你在英语学习上非常努力，对英语非常感兴趣。可以用这些句子构成一篇精彩的优秀的英语作文。作为一名初一的学生，能够写出这样水平的作文，相当的了不起。
继续努力，你会取得更加优异的成绩。
需要注意的是单词的书写，以及一些介词的应用。
这位同学你好，如对解答还有疑问，可在答案下方的【添加讨论】中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。感谢你的配合！祝你学习进步，生活愉快！
我是扬帆，助你远航！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
请评价下列句子（有错误的地方请加以改正）：
1.When the students feel tired, they can put （改为press,按） a button in a small box, then they can listen to their favourite singer's songs.
2.When the class is over, robots will give you some food to eat, of course , if you are hungry now.（if you are hungry）
3.There are all kinfs (kinds) of lessons(subjects,课程) in （on） the computer.
4.Students only need to take their pens and paper.
5.Students can choose their favourite subjects to learn.
6.There will be a restaurant in (on) the playground , when we feel thirty or hungry , we can go there and have a drink or have a big meal.(something to eat)
7.Everyone will have a laptop on their desk, the students can carry them everywhere ,because the laptop will be very light.
这些句子都能够正确运用will 引导的将来时，用词准确，表达清楚，意思明确。并且想像丰富，生动合理。能够用所学的新时态写出这些句子，可见你在英语学习上非常努力，对英语非常感兴趣。可以用这些句子构成一篇精彩的优秀的英语作文。作为一名初一的学生，能够写出这样水平的作文，相当的了不起。
继续努力，你会取得更加优异的成绩。
需要注意的是单词的书写，以及一些介词的应用。
这位同学你好，如对解答还有疑问，可在答案下方的【添加讨论】中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。感谢你的配合！祝你学习进步，生活愉快！
我是扬帆，助你远航！
最终答案：略