请语法高手们帮个忙,我写作文求改语法错误,麻烦提出何处有错谢谢.30分
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请语法高手们帮个忙,我写作文求改语法错误,麻烦提出何处有错谢谢.30分
Car was invented by Karl Benz who is a German in 1844.Now cars are the most popular vehicle in the world.We can see people driving their own cars everywhere.Karl Benz who is the father of the Car created the best thing
for human world.The operators of cars are called drivers.Drivers are in different age.Some of then are young ,Some of then are old.But there are some questions that we should concern about:Is that okay for young people to drive?Are they ready to drive?In my opinion,young people are not suitable for driving.Some people got hurt even died by young drivers,who are careless drivers.
In china,most of the young people are not graduated from school.Teachers are still teaching them how to be good men,They are too young to driver.Driving cars require people not only to learn how to drive cars,but also they need to fellow the driving rules and to be good drivers.Unfortunately,most of Chinese young drivers are not good drivers because they only know how to drive.So,I suggest that young people should not learn to drive cars because they don’t realize that driving a car also requires responsibility.
Car was invented by Karl Benz who is a German in 1844.Now cars are the most popular vehicle in the world.We can see people driving their own cars everywhere.Karl Benz who is the father of the Car created the best thing
for human world.The operators of cars are called drivers.Drivers are in different age.Some of then are young ,Some of then are old.But there are some questions that we should concern about:Is that okay for young people to drive?Are they ready to drive?In my opinion,young people are not suitable for driving.Some people got hurt even died by young drivers,who are careless drivers.
In china,most of the young people are not graduated from school.Teachers are still teaching them how to be good men,They are too young to driver.Driving cars require people not only to learn how to drive cars,but also they need to fellow the driving rules and to be good drivers.Unfortunately,most of Chinese young drivers are not good drivers because they only know how to drive.So,I suggest that young people should not learn to drive cars because they don’t realize that driving a car also requires responsibility.
没有问题,是正确的!
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再问: 一点点语法错误都米有?如果没有的话分就给你了,最迟明天给你分。 没有错的话给你加10
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