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One of the people who influence me the most is my middle school’s Chinese teacher Mrs.Su.She is a high educated woman,I learnt a lot from her.
Mrs.Su often used the school hours to talk about the Extra-curricular knowledge such as Chinese classical literature,Chinese modern literature and Chinese folk songs.She told us not to forget our own Chinese culture while we accepted the foreign cultures.China needed our generation to preserve our Chinese culture.I never read any Chinese classical literature after school before I knew her.,I thought it was a waste of time.I also only liked Christmas for all the festivals and felt tired of Chinese Spring Festival.She let me know that how important it is to preserve our own culture.
Mrs.Su lives a colorful life.She always went to movies,concerts and talked about them in class afterward.She recommended a lot of great books and movies to us.She loves traveling,too.She has been to many countries and went over China.Every time after traveling,she put on her traveling pictures to show her class and talked about the scene,culture and history of that reign.Because of her influence,I always go to movies,concerts and began to love traveling.She made me had a brand-new view to life.She let me know that be alive was to enjoy my life,not only know school-work and complain about school.I need to pay attention to every aspect of my life,school was not what my whole life should be.A person who only knows study lives a broken life,always go outside and be in activities is the way to make my knowledge wider.Since then,I also came up with my career in the future.I want to be a Graphic designer.Doing fine art is my favorite thing.I know when people enjoy themselves while they are doing what they like.Before that,I always thought about doing which job had most earnings,she helped me to figure out that I need to live a happy life,earn money is not my aim.Since her knowledge and teaching,I told myself I wanted to be a woman like her.I read a lot of books and improved my writing skills a lot.I began to love writing.
Mrs.Su dressed up nice every day.She was like a star,everyone was attracted by her.She is not only full of knowledge,but also fashionable.Because of her,I began to pay attention to my dressings.A girl who wants to be more attractive needs to be great both inside and outside.
Mrs.Su was the teacher who influenced me the most in China.She told me how to enjoy my life and made my life colorful.

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