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请懂英文的高手来给我纠正一下这篇英语作文
My Holiday In Zhuhai
In last Summer holiday.I went to Zhuhai to visited my uncle with my mother.We stayed at uncle's home for two month.We had a good timein Zhuhai.
In the first day.We had good food for lunch in a restaurant.Then,uncle took us by car to a big park.It's a beautiful and clean park.I played games with my little brother in the park,and my mother drank some juice and lay in the sun,and my uncle and aunt took many pictures.I was tired,but I was very happy.
In the evening.My uncle and I got to a big supermarket called "JOSCO" by car.I bought some nice pens and a big pencil-case,but it's broken soon.And my uncle bought a "LEGO" toy for me.It's very expensive,but uncle said it's my present because I got a good point in my test.I was very surprised and excited.
My Holiday In Zhuhai
In last Summer holiday.I went to Zhuhai to visited my uncle with my mother.We stayed at uncle's home for two month.We had a good timein Zhuhai.
In the first day.We had good food for lunch in a restaurant.Then,uncle took us by car to a big park.It's a beautiful and clean park.I played games with my little brother in the park,and my mother drank some juice and lay in the sun,and my uncle and aunt took many pictures.I was tired,but I was very happy.
In the evening.My uncle and I got to a big supermarket called "JOSCO" by car.I bought some nice pens and a big pencil-case,but it's broken soon.And my uncle bought a "LEGO" toy for me.It's very expensive,but uncle said it's my present because I got a good point in my test.I was very surprised and excited.
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