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高手帮我把这句改通顺点.这句语法应该有错...
Thirdly,the possible reason of the change is that the China’s new generations focus more on entertained consumption ,furthermore,having been influenced by the Chinese concept ‘face’ and Western advance-consumption.读起来特别扭 ==帮我改改吧
高手帮我把这句改通顺点.这句语法应该有错...
Thirdly,the possible reason for the change is that China’s new generations focus more on entertainment consumption .Besides,they have been influenced by the Chinese concept of ‘face’ and Western advance-consumption.
再问: 谢谢你~~能帮我再看看这句么 我觉得worry about那里有问题,,纠结中... if the whole society has consummating social security system, its citizens would not worry about their future, thus, it is usually to spend instead of saving.
再答: 是想要表达“如果这个社会建立起一个完善的社会保障体系,那么它的居民将不需要为自己的未来担忧,所以他们一般都倾向于消费而不是储蓄。” 这个大概意思吗? consummate好像更偏向于“完满”,要不改成perfect吧,有一个比较完美的,完善的体系 if the whole society has a perfect social security system, its citizens would not have to worry about their future, thus, they usually prefer consuming to saving. / they usually prefer to consume rather than save. wound not have to do sth. 将不需要担心将来