关于感恩的英语作文 求修改 I want to thank you

关于感恩的英语作文 求修改 I want to thank you
Thanks giving day is a day which used to celebrate the good harvest.But now,it is a holiday,which we thank to someone who helped us.Today,I want to thank you—my parents.
Because of you,I knew something about this world.Because of you,I realized how to be a well - behaved girl.Because of you,I got confidence to do something that I was afraid before.
Thank you,my dearest mom.It is you who bring me to the world.It is you who teach me how to learn.When the darkness comes,you turn on the lights in my heart.When my confidence is broken into pieces,you pick them up and tell me that Never give up.Any time,you are the compass which leads me to the right way.
I will give the sincerely thanks to my dear dad.You are the firmest mountain in my heart.You always say that if you don’t work harder,you won’t get good marks.I do work harder,and I do get good marks.You cook every meal for me,whenever or wherever.I will remember the things all of you say.Although they are simple,they are really practical.
However,how about the social problem?Nowadays,quite a few students are become less and less idea of being grateful.They think all the such things for granted,as parents supporting them,teachers helping them and waiters serving them.They just say "Thank you" to others,but never do anything actually.
We should do something for the people who ever helped us.Such as,helping your mother do housework,don’t let your parents too worried and try your best to show them you are the best.“I want to thank you” is not a simple expression.Every one should prove how you express your sincerely thank!
求修改,挑一下语法错误或者是其他什么可以改进的地方,明天演讲要用.

中式英语比较严重／／／
再问： - =这个要肿么改
再答： 很难跟你每个句子修改 不了解你想表达的想法　你要自己多看几变／
再问： 0 0提几句呢 我看一下大概是肿么改。应试教育嘛，你也懂得。我们只会做选择题
再答： Thanks giving day is a day which used to celebrate the good harvest. But now, it is a holiday, which we thank to someone who helped us. Today, I want to thank you—my parents. 改下第一段　不知道有没有把你的意思改了 Thanksgiving day is a day which used to celebrate the good harvest. But now,I want to thank my parents who supported and helped us. 其实写的这些　你说出来　大家都能明白　但出于个人写作习惯问题．简单点好．
再问： 好的 非常感谢 个人写作习惯神马的还是要慢慢来养成啦。。。~